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 Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:17 pm
Nara_Neji_02 I've read better fanfiction written for animes that's written better than Twilight.
THIS.
And I can't stand animu anymore. 
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:20 pm
"-tion" is a pretty common suffix, i would say.
i think you're just desperate to find something to point and laugh at. : /
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:51 pm
PeacePucca "-tion" is a pretty common suffix, i would say. i think you're just desperate to find something to point and laugh at. : /
And I'm poking at the names they like to pick. Not just that it ends in -tion.
How many stories written by Twitards have either sounded like the examples I posted? Countless. Just once I'd like to see one by the name of Bloody Circumcision.
I'm not desperate for anything. There are just so many things wrong with Twilight, and at the moment, so many Antis, that you have to grab things before someone else takes them. That's not desperation. That's survival of the lulziest.
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 4:40 pm
PeacePucca "-tion" is a pretty common suffix, i would say. i think you're just desperate to find something to point and laugh at. : / They're Twitards.... That's why we haven't shot them all yet. So that we can point and laugh at them....How else do they contribute to society? Where DID you come from.... I've never seen YOU before...
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:20 pm
oh godz, the grammars.... gonk
sigh...creative titles have been taken over...
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:53 pm
 I decided to check the link out and turned right back around when I read the first couple of lines. It had crappy written all over it. surprised Plus I wanted to save my major brain cells since I do want to have a good Senior year.
On a side note the SAT is scored out of 2400 points, 800 for each section (critical reading, writing, & math). I've taken it twice now... and well let's just say I've had pretty crappy days on each test date and not happy at all with my scores.
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:46 pm
I'm up to chapter eight. REALLY GUIS THIS IS ASUM!!! I mean, really. Bella's eyes are PURPLE. I thought the Mary-Sue couldn't get any worse, but damn... Quote: “Hmm… I feel..weird,” I murmured.
“My god Bella! You have purple eyes!! Look ! take a look!” Alice said animated.
“W-o-w,” Everyone was staring at me.
“What?” I asked, puzzled. I took the mirror from Alice’s hands and peered at myself.
Still brunette, but I notice that my skin got paler, and my lashes got longer, my lips were a luscious pink, and my eyes.. my eyes were this deep dark purple.
“Amazing,” was all I managed to say.
“Hey you might be prettier than Rosalie,” Emmett humored. Rosalie instantly glared at Emmett.
I turned to Edward saving him last. He immediately hugged me.
“I’m back,” I whispered.
“I’ve missed you.”
He let go and pulled me in for a kiss. It was longer and more passionate.
His lips were moving with mine, excpet there was a difference in this kiss…
It wasn’t cold anymore, it was warm and soft…
I broke away.
“Hmmm.. and I thought you would break away first,” I laughed.
He grinned triumphantly. “It’s much easier now,” He paused, “Now I don’t have to worry about crushing you every second.”
“Now about the theory I have,” Carisle said, “ I think the reason why Edward can’t read your thoughts and the Volturi powers do not affect you is because…”
“Yes?” I asked.
“Did you know many years ago a vampire and a werewolf bonded?” Carisle looked at me cautiously to see how I would react.
I stayed composed.
“No, why?” I asked baffled.
“Well, I do hope you know that you are related to a vampire and a werewolf,” He pointed out.
I sat there shocked, I didn’t know my mouth was open until Edward closed it.
“I did a little research while you where transforming,” Carisle smiled.
“Well, your Great-Great-Grand Father eloped with a vampire…” He paused, “On his wedding day.” I nodded still in shock.
“Well they fell in love it was as simple as that, but there life was not easy,” Carisle whispered in a low voice, “the vampires and werewolves were oppose to this match.”
“But they didn’t care, no matter how far there world was apart they still loved each other,” Carisle said and looked up at me.
“So basically what you are trying to say is that I’m a half werewolf and vampire?” I asked appalled.
“Well I don’t know now,” Carisle said scanning me. “Since you were bitten by Edward,” He muttered.
“So why did I still age?” I asked.
“You didn’t, when you were 19 you were suppose to stop aging,” Carisle said as a-matter-of-fact.
I turned to look at Edward he was just as shocked as I was.
“Do you still love me?” I asked, “You know since I am part werewolf.”
He pulled me in to his arms and muttered in my hair, “No matter what you are, I will always love you.”
“What’s her power then?” Emmett asked eagerly.
“I don’t know yet,” Carisle stated.
I looked at Alice, then all of a sudden I had a vision. Not a vision but the past, somewhere in a party. It looked like a girl was embracing Edward and then there was fight; then everything blurred.
“Bella,” Edward said shaking me. “Are you okay?” His eyes wide with concern.
I glared at him.
“Mr. Edward Cullen,” I gritted through my teeth.
“Yes..”He asked puzzled.
“That night when I was shopping with Alice, what really happened.”
“Um..well,” He paused, “Don’t get me wrong I was going to tell you after the wedding but, you wouldn’t let me.”
I snarled.
“It was just Tanya she was just there to greet me and she got carried away after I told her to stop and then..” I cutted him off short.
“Did you kiss her?” I said icily. He looked at me, offended by my remark.
“Never Bella, I would NEVER in my life do that to you,” His voice smoother than silk.
I turned away and looked at Alice. “Alice?” I asked.
“Nothing happened Bella I promise you that,” Alice smiled wryly.
“Wait!” Alice gasped, “How did you see that?”
“I had a vision… well not exactly more like visiting the past,” I stated.
“Great another vision freak,” Emmett mumbled.
I laughed.
“How did that happen?” Alice asked again.
“I don’t know I just looked at you and it sort of happened…”my voice trailed off.
“Hmm…Alice try to vision what Aro is doing at this very moment,” Carisle asked.
“Okay?” She looked perplexed.
She started to stare into space…
“Weird.. it’s not working,” Alice whispered.
“Bella you try,” Carisle turned to me.
“Okay…,”I said.
I sat there trying to vision Aro, all of a sudden, I saw Aro sitting there admiring the office lady thinking if they should turn her into a vampire or kill her.
“Well, he’s thinking if he should turn that office girl into a vampire or kill her,” I said stiffly.
I looked at Edward, he was amazed. I smiled at him.
“I wonder how come Alice couldn’t see it too,” Edward thought.
“I have no idea I’m kind of confused myself,” I answered Edward.
“What? I didn’t say anything?” Edward said bemused.
“I heard you Edward, I think we all did,” I turned around for everyones support but, everyone shook their head.
Weird….
“Edward, what am I thinking right now?” Carisle asked curisously.
“Okay..”Edward uttered. He paused, his eyes were glowering at Carisle, like he was trying to solve a mystery of some sort.
“Nothing,” He heavily sighed.
“I think I know Bella’s power now,” Carisle said amazed. I looked at him puzzled.
“Your theory?” I asked.
“I think Bella can steal powers away and use it as her own,” Carisle persumed, “But I think that this can fade for a certain amount of time if she so chooses.”
“English?” I asked.
“Meaning,” Edward sighed, “You can steal our powers away from us and use it, but you can also dull our powers so we can’t use it for a certain amount of time.”
All seven eyes were on me, shocked about what they had just discovered.
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