Welcome to Gaia! ::

Reply Poetry
Collection of things that are gathering dust

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Liway
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 4:11 pm


I apologise if any of the following threads offends. I won't say they're not meant to because that never really occured to me when I wrote them. All comments are accepted, read, laugh at, acted upon *and anything else I will be able to think of*... I will not apologise for anything any one of us could do (ya know, The Mood Takes Us where It Will

so here we go.... redface
PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 4:20 pm


Conversation For The Dead 1.1
Damn it.
Don't tell me I'll waste
A perfectly good title
Just because I can't think
Straight when you're not
Beside me, touching me
To warm my soul.

I'm only interested in your pain!

How could I have said:
There is beauty in the ugly?

So you can dislocate your shoulder.
Now, baby, try your neck!

Liway
Captain


Liway
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 3:40 am


Touch

She lies on the bed, her eyes half-closed.
The music touches her, going through her
in silent communion with her hammering heart.

She watches not only with her somnolent eyes
but also with her skin. It breathes easier when
he moves closer and then tightens as he touches her.

She watches with a hidden smile as her skin,
breathless, whispers of hightened awareness.

Her skin never lies. It knows his desire
almost as if it were her own.

Without audible words, he turns to her,
the eyes asking, the skin demanding.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 5:11 am


He whisperes,
he dreams,
he touches,
he caresses.

Gently humming,
gently breathing,
gently awakening.

Time to love,
time to care,
time to share.

Whisperes and dreams.
Shadows and light.
Love and delight.

(( just what came to mind after reading your last one. ))

Gwyndara


Liway
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 9:54 am


A Toast To Buttons!


"When I look at you
And you look at me
I see the sun shining through
But Don't forget I own
All that glitters in your eyes!"

I know that's what you're thinking
Everytime I see you staring at me


because...

...you push a button...
and my breathing deepens as passion rises

...you push a button...
my heart cracks open and the cold seeps to my bones

...you push a button...
and I feel your smile carresing all that I deny

...you push a button...
I take my life underneath my shadow to hide

...you push a button...
and all I wanted to believe in dies with my innocense
PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 9:58 am


The Pit

I have my left eye purpled for me.
I wear it with pride
And they stare
Not understanding
Why I would do such a thing.
I laugh at they're misplaced ignorance.
I show them my demon face
And they cringed.

Why are you scared
Of what you see in your child?
Do you not love me unconditionally?
Have you not accepted beforehand
That I might bring your destruction?
Why do you try to forget
That you made me the way I am
And pushed me to this excuse of existence.

I would gather my brothers
To lay an artful waste to your life
But we have surpassed your pety
Notions of what is good or bad.
We do not hate. We do not love. We do not care.
We will watch your kind dissipate
Into the silent misery we have created.
There you can scream forever while we sing.
 

Liway
Captain


Lesperence

PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:46 am


WOW...these are to the point of frightening desire.
I am speechless...(Which is why this is written. razz )
You have a way of smoothing it out, and then, out of nowhere, slamming the point into the reader. Giving them a black eye just like the person in your last poem.
I'm seriously impressed. You truly have a talent for weaving words.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 6:17 am


arumunus
WOW...these are to the point of frightening desire.
I am speechless...(Which is why this is written. razz )
You have a way of smoothing it out, and then, out of nowhere, slamming the point into the reader. Giving them a black eye just like the person in your last poem.
I'm seriously impressed. You truly have a talent for weaving words.


Thank you redface

now I'm really self-concious about what to put up next sweatdrop

Glad you enjoyed it though...

Liway
Captain


Liway
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 6:19 am


Gwyndara
He whisperes,
he dreams,
he touches,
he caresses.

(( just what came to mind after reading your last one. ))


ahem.... xd
I will not be held responsible! rofl

What were you thinking, Gwyn? twisted
PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:24 pm


Another Long conversation Between Myselves 1.3

I feel the wind choking me...
Just because I have been too happy...
And the sun...
My lord the sun...
Is trying so hard to catch me dry...
And my lungs, I think, will fry...
Trully it is s**t...
But you have to watch it...
You said it's long...
So, why don't you say anymore...
Don't be so quiet...
Silence isn't like what they said...
Come closer...
I'm about to whisper...
Advantages... advantages...
We discuss the positives...
Leaving out the negatives...
Knowing they are more desirable...
I know where I'm going...
Even though I'm blind...
I talk a thousand miles a breath...
If you could hear me make a sound...
But silence is precious...
So, I keep it in pocket...
My anger is beautiful...
Amidst the riots of the sun...
If you want to see it sometimes...
I'll arrange for you to come around...

Liway
Captain


Liway
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:26 pm


Not For Chocolates

I'm stressing
Because I find myself an unbeliver.
Yes, I've looked at you before,
Made love to you before
Told you I love you so many times before.
And you've looked at me,
You've had me,
You've betrayed me
And you've told me you love me
All in a single moment.

Memories of how you kissed me
Irritates me
because I can still feel you
With my eyes wide open.
Such idiocy that
I let you come in me
Knowing you would leave
My heart wide open
As you went around
Sucking all that I've hidden,
Taking all that I denied you.

You bind my hands behind my head
As you ******** my sanity into
Smouldering pieces.

I look around in helpless rage
Trying to piece together
something that would resemble me
but there is nothing left behind
But the rope around my wrist
Reminding me I was once your slave.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:30 pm


So Easily Undone

So Easily... undone....
by little things i might think you mean
when you look my way...
by your haste glances and quick smiles...

so easily undone because I let you take me to places you own
so easily i fall because you let me hold on...

but everything so easily change
because i've nothing to believe without you

infatuation can so easily become love can so easily turn to hate
because without effort at all, you just leave me alone.

Liway
Captain

Reply
Poetry

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum