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 Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:06 pm
 :/ It gets rated really low, but no one tells me how to improve... Help?
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:08 pm
Don't worry... people think I am invisible as well...
First of I like it that you made a lively and more original pose, and I like the colors, even if I think they could be a little stronger, or more vibrant (But the shading of her chest is great). I think the problems start with the legs. They should be drawn with more bends in it, not that straight, mostly the part more down. Her knees look a little strange. Maybe try to show that part more with the form of the leg, then by those two lines, or with shading. About the feet, they are a little flat, and toes are a little more like blocks that were rounded, and not that round. Try to draw after some photos of feet. (It is the hardest part for me to....) And maybe her arms a very-very small bit to long. But these are morely small mistakes in my eyes, you are on a very good way.
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:59 am
I would give this 5/5 in an instant. People will vote bad if they don't like the avi that the rendition is of, ridiculous I know. This is great. You do fantastic on proportion and the hands and feet are very well done for being the hardest parts for most people to draw. Also as Narcisz said, the pose is great.
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:02 am
wow, i like dat dress, its beautiful eek
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:18 pm
i dont see why people rat it so low. i love it. the colors and the shading as people above have already pointed out xD lol but yes 5/5
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:48 am
i agree that the knees are awkward looking, and so do her feet. I don't know if this is it completely, but maybe change where she's facing, it looks a little strange. sweatdrop
But otherwise, freakin' awesome.
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:04 pm
In my opinion it looks awesome as it is!
Maybe it has something with the legs because they look a tad bit weird...perhaps too straight maybe have it bending a bit...also the positioning of the foot looks off...
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:04 pm
If you study human anatomy, facial expressions/structure, and work at dynamic poses that fill up the space and keep your eyes moving around the picture, you'll be in great shape! I would also suggest making darker lines for your line art. I had a hard time finding certain details with the coloring. And try to learn how to better your coloring skills through tutorials and practice. Go BOLD! It'll get you noticed and it will impress people. Good luck!
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:22 pm
The legs. Those are the only things that might be a tad bit off.
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