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babydolly93

PostPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:39 pm


ok im not that good wit poems and this one kinda sounds like me rambiling so here goes:

i've heard stories of love
there r is the love where its tru and unconditional and there r the ones where its just not meant to b.....
there r those who search 4 there perfect ones and those who get found in a snap.



but me i just seem to find all the wrong ones
when im wit them 4 to long they tell me we're done
i just done cry over that kind of love
i cry for the love that i see doves that real love that makes me see stars
that love were im blinded just by the sound of his name type love



i never want that type love where it just hurts to say good-bye
but i dont want that love where they just lie

i want the unconditional type love
the love that i'll b telling my children in the future that there is someone 4 u somewhere out in the open waiting to meet u

thats the type of love id really want
i dont want someone to b my knight in shinig armor and im not trying to sound needy

im just waiting 4 the right one.... r u him??

and yeah thats where i stopped cuz i had writers block sweatdrop sweatdrop
im pretty sure it sounds suckish its ok im not good wit poems like my mom is
PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:44 pm


tenten1487
ok im not that good wit poems and this one kinda sounds like me rambiling so here goes:

i've heard stories of love
there r is the love where its tru and unconditional and there r the ones where its just not meant to b.....
there r those who search 4 there perfect ones and those who get found in a snap.



but me i just seem to find all the wrong ones
when im wit them 4 to long they tell me we're done
i just done cry over that kind of love
i cry for the love that i see doves that real love that makes me see stars
that love were im blinded just by the sound of his name type love




i never want that type love where it just hurts to say good-bye
but i dont want that love where they just lie

i want the unconditional type love
the love that i'll b telling my children in the future that there is someone 4 u somewhere out in the open waiting to meet u

thats the type of love id really want
i dont want someone to b my knight in shinig armor and im not trying to sound needy

im just waiting 4 the right one.... r u him??

and yeah thats where i stopped cuz i had writers block sweatdrop sweatdrop
im pretty sure it sounds suckish its ok im not good wit poems like my mom is
biggrin biggrin seems like your looking for love other than i poem but i like it biggrin


i uh kinda want to write another one....

I Sergeant Keroro I


babydolly93

PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 1:06 pm


rasdori10
tenten1487
ok im not that good wit poems and this one kinda sounds like me rambiling so here goes:

i've heard stories of love
there r is the love where its tru and unconditional and there r the ones where its just not meant to b.....
there r those who search 4 there perfect ones and those who get found in a snap.



but me i just seem to find all the wrong ones
when im wit them 4 to long they tell me we're done
i just done cry over that kind of love
i cry for the love that i see doves that real love that makes me see stars
that love were im blinded just by the sound of his name type love




i never want that type love where it just hurts to say good-bye
but i dont want that love where they just lie

i want the unconditional type love
the love that i'll b telling my children in the future that there is someone 4 u somewhere out in the open waiting to meet u

thats the type of love id really want
i dont want someone to b my knight in shinig armor and im not trying to sound needy

im just waiting 4 the right one.... r u him??

and yeah thats where i stopped cuz i had writers block sweatdrop sweatdrop
im pretty sure it sounds suckish its ok im not good wit poems like my mom is
biggrin biggrin seems like your looking for love other than i poem but i like it biggrin


i uh kinda want to write another one....

sweatdrop sweatdrop thx....
PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:23 am


Those are all really good poems. To me a good poem is expressing what your feeling using metaphors or similies to describe those feelings so its not too direct to the reader. Also to add imagery to the poem so the reader can visualize, smell, taste, hear or touch throughout the poem.

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meluvcheese

PostPosted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:14 pm


damn u guys r so good at writing poems im so sucky -.-

never let go
never give up
always move on
always go ahead
dont weep about the past
dont weep about the future
keep you're head held high and you will go on...

terrible -.-
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