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pirhan

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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:19 pm

Just getting back into the swing of drawing, so please keep that in mind. (And, I think I've drawn like, three people in my entire life. >_< )

Avatar art - it's quite rough right now, but I was wanting to get opinions before doing anything final. Not happy with the pixie wings, but I think it's an easy fix. Open to pretty much anything and everything. :3 (Do the undies look okay?)

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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:17 am

Hmm. Looks pretty solid.
I think the head may be a bit small, though.
Maybe that's just the lack of hair that makes it look smaller.
And of course the wings need work.

I'd be glad to recieve art from you. Lol. :3
Really good.

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pirhan

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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:57 am

Aww, thanks! <3

While waiting for a post, I cleaned it up some more and redrew the wings. The problem with the wings was that I was guessing. I usually line the spine in and work from there - which I did, and they look much better. I also cleaned up the forum badge with better perspective.

Going to clean it up more, shade it in pencil. I'm also going to make a copy onto stiffer paper and colour it with my watercolour pencils. 3nodding

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:53 pm

ooh, sounds good.
Post the finished product so I can bask in your awesomeness, kay?
;]

I can't believe you don't draw people often, though.
I could never draw something like that even if I practiced my whole life.

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necrobestiality

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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:56 am

The back seems a little too big to me; I think it sticks out too far maybe..?
I dunno
And the head does seem a little small
Keep up the good work though ^^

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:30 pm

Thanks for the suggestions. It's done now, but I'll definitely keep the suggestions in mind for future stuff. :3

Here's the finished product:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v347/pirhan/idleRat004c.jpg

Most of the uneven-ness is due to watercolour on non water colour paper. >_<

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Banuxwitch

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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:33 pm

The head is too small, other than that and the wings(that you mentioned yourself) it looks good.

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:54 pm

i dont think the back is too but. but like everyone else says, i think either the neck is too long or the head is too small. also, (not to sound perverted) i dont really think her boobs are too small, but they just dont seemed positioned right.

its an amazing drawing though. i still dont think i just started. i think your jus bein modest confused

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