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First lineart....I like it.

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Allyn285

PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 3:41 pm


This is my first lineart...And I like it. Please reply and tell me what you think of it!User Image
PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 3:48 pm


looks good, although I'm not one to tell! what program did you use? looks like a finished piece to me, are you sure it's your first lineart? razz

EDIT: something doesn't seem right here. are you sure this is your work?

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Shoroie

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:22 am


-: I can spot some fabric issues, some incorrect proportions and lighting problems but before I can get to that. Elsiane said that she's not sure that this is yours.

Can you proof us wrong? Do you have other works that you can show us? Maybe a website? ^^ :-
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