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Does this picture look alright?

necrobestiality

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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 9:45 am

I wanted to make the angles and everything look decent before I inked and stuff .__.

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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 4:49 pm

Hmm I'm no artist, but I really like it.
As for things to fix-- I'd recommend changing the legs of the girl on the floor. Having them splayed out from the knee or something would be cute.
Also her skirt and legs aren't drawn properly. She's laying down, so I really don't think her skirt would poof out like that. maybe you could try making it look like it's resting on the back of her legs and on the floor?

Everything else looks great.

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necrobestiality

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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:04 pm

Thanks! It was kind of an annoying angle to draw.
And I was getting frustrated with the skirt xD
It's supposed to be really poofy and I couldn't quite get it right
Oh well, atleast the person liked it, that's what's important

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:00 pm

I really like it :3

For the girl laying dow, I think if you minutely changed the folds near the floor, it would make look a bit more that she's laying down.

I think you could really add some fun by bringing on leg up (bent at the knee) with the girl laying down.

As for the girl standing up - she looks fantastic! I really like it. :3 You might want to change the folds on the skirt by the leg that is on the other girl.

Can't wait to see it inked.

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