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Natarii Ace

PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:29 pm


A boy is visiting his old elementary school. "It's been so long" he said as he walked through the silent driven halls of his past. Each step he took would cause him to remember a distant memory that was vivid and full of life. From the long talks with friends to the bloody beatdowns he suffered from bullies, his recollection was very accute. As he approached the end of the hall so to did his memories fade away to the dark recessess of his mind.

The boy now standing inside the principal's office sees himself sittingon the floor writing the entire student code of conduct. Though an illusion of his mind the boy begins to burst into tears as he can no longer contain his emotions. "Why isn't anyone here ?" he shouted. As the boy looked around the dull dry clay-like pink rose walls that stretched across the room suddenly began to shake uncontrollably. The boy ran out into the lobby to see through the glass entrance doors.A huge tsunami approached, the boy with little time to react sees the doors covered in ocean blue water. The boy now confused and shocked stands helpless into deep abyss when suddenly a huge row teeth passed by. While it was passing a huge yellow reptilian like eye maked contact and stared deep within the boys soul. At that moment the boy felt insignificant at the omnious presence of the leviathan. The leviathan was so big that the boy couldn't grasp the concept of it as his field of vision was limited to that of his own eyes.

The leviathan's mouth began to open and as powerful as a black hole it began sucking in all the air and the glass doors shattered the water began to flow into the leviathan's mouth. the boy powerless to stop the beast was sucked in.

To be continued?
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If you want me to continue the story and I'd like your opinions
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 8:06 am


Hmm.. I think you should give us like a flash back of when he was picked on. Try to have like a storm warning that the boy didn't know about due to his sadness. Definety contiue you have a good start.

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