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 Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:58 pm
am writing a story right now
and it is really long (well to me it is)
its a rough draft. So the description isnt that great yet i will add more
but should i post it on here
im having big trouble with dialogue
it jus sounds to much lik he said she said
and im am kind of stuck right now
but please reply if you want me to post
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:29 pm
Don't worry so much about how 'good' it is- I'm sure that anyone here will be more than willing to give you a few pointers or a hand in the right direction if you ask for assistance.
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Priestess of Neptune Crew
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:27 pm
It depends, like what Priestess of Neptune said people in the guild will help point you in the correct direction. But if you aren't confident of your story you could always ask someone to Beta Read for you.
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:49 pm
If your having a problem with "he said she said" things ( I always do) I usually just begin to set it up almost like a script then when that gets old change it to a thought or even like *example* "Why are you laughing?" she said giggling herself. or something like that. Work on it until your sure you want advice until then work on it until your ready for some group editing.
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