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 Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:54 pm
I am writing a story right now
and it is really long (well to me it is)
its a rough draft. So the description isnt that great yet i will add more
but should i post it on here
im having big trouble with dialogue
it jus sounds to much lik he said she said
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:05 pm
I think that if you're having trouble with it, you should. If you know you can make it better before posting it, do so, then post it.
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:55 pm
thanks I will correct as much as i can then i will post it thank you
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