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ms mundy sniper

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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:00 am

doodle (left) alex (right)

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:38 am

I think the girls face could be a little bigger, her head looks dead small, also maybe change the colour of her hair smile
Redhead woooo!
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Ghostface jamie24

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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:03 am

I think it looks good smile but you mite need to make doodles head a bit bigger & change the color of her hair. I like heart it otherwise.

Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 1:19 am

You should move doodle's left eye and mouth to the left a little bit so that doodle's face is more symmetrical(right word?)

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hellhound9
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:56 am

Sableice

You should move doodle's left eye and mouth to the left a little bit so that doodle's face is more symmetrical(right word?)

Symmetrical tis indeed the correct word. I was thinking the same eye should be up a little, but it is very nice, I especially like the cat!

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:19 pm

As has already been said, the girls head looks like it is being squished down or something so you'll want to elongate her face. Also, the shoulders especially on the boy are to close together. Makes his head look almost too big. You can broaden his shoulders as well as his chest to make him look more proportionate. Using a smoother media for the hair will help with the glossy look or highlighted areas in the hair. Possibly put more activity in the background so it doesn't look so flat. In the end, just do as you like best.

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