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Would love a Critique! -Lineart-

Luna Kai lv6

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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 5:59 am

Sorry if this stretches the page, I'm using a larger monitor than normal.

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So, any thoughts? Quality of the lineart, or the drawing itself? I'd love to get any critique possible.

Or, you can go "LOLOMGBOOBS!!!" but it'd be nice if you didn't.

Programs used: Adobe Photoshop CS2 and a Wacom Graphire pen tablet.

Just so you know, it's a female version of Pyro from the game Team Fortress 2. Here's a ref.

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Also a shameless link to my deviantART page.

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:04 pm

well for a line art with no shading or anything. my main prob was trying to really focus on it. because u have so much stuff going on in the pic.

but once i got past how much stuff there was it is really nice

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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:16 pm

LOLOMGBOOBS... are slightly lopsided. n .n The one on the (my) left is higher than the one on the right. the foot over the machine gun thingy is angled a little off. It looks a bit too short.

There isn't a WHOLE lot going on, it just looks that way because the lines are jumbled and there's not much variation to the thinkness. I think all you really need to do is shade and blend.

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