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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 2:08 pm


911

Long ago in Bible times,the number 9-1-1 ment nothing.
When telophones came along,that changed,it ment life or death,
for you'd dail it in sheer emergengys.
But a few years ago the meaning of 9-1-1 was turned upside down...
like the lifes lost,the lifes gone,the familys torn.
The day the towers burned to the ground.
The day of 9/11.

~~Silver~~(me!)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 4:38 pm


SilverStripe
911

Long ago in Bible times,the number 9-1-1 ment nothing.
When telophones came along,that changed,it ment life or death,
for you'd dail it in sheer emergengys.
But a few years ago the meaning of 9-1-1 was turned upside down...
like the lifes lost,the lifes gone,the familys torn.
The day the towers burned to the ground.
The day of 9/11.

~~Silver~~(me!)
I really like your poem Silver biggrin

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 6:57 pm


Thanks Misty!
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:16 pm


SilverStripe
Thanks Misty!
You're welcome ~Silver~

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:09 pm


*nods* Awesome and bewildering coincidence, was it not? (and I mean awesome as in just...''awe''...not cool.)

But I do like your poem. Very touching and well highlighted....
PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 8:59 pm


I really like your poem Silver. And it has a lot of meaning behind it, you are right 9-1-1 does have a new meaning today. Very nice biggrin

Angel of the Silver Snow
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:47 pm


I like it mrgreen
PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 8:07 pm


That's a well thought out, meaningful poem! It's really cool!

macfox717


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:24 pm


thats really good i like it
PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 2:49 am


Wow! That's a really good poem, and it's true.

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JesusRocks4Ever

PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:40 pm


thats awesome heres one i worte for 9/11

9/11/2001
On this day 4 planes were hijacked one crashed into the world trade center, one plane into each tower,one plane into the pentagon, the 4th plane was aimed for the white house but because the passengers attempted to re-take control of the plane from the hijackers it crashed into a near by field.

Alot of people lost family and friends close to them on this day,
it was a very sad day about 2,793 people died and another 24 were reported as missing
we will never forget this tragic day...
God Bless all who lost a life on 9/11/2001

what do ya all think?
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