Otulissa
@Katziegirls -- you're falling for him? Awwwww that's so cute!!
biggrin XD Haha, most of my friends don't really "fall" for anyone. So yeah. Then again, neither do I. But, does he know how you feel?
Beautiful poems. I love the emotion soaked throughout every line, and your word choice is perfect. The line breaks are effective, and your tone and voice are beautiful.
heart Aww thank you. Im really into it and i would show my friends at school but they down under stand me. And i would most likely get in trouble.
These words do heed, afore you seed
In the garden of delight
For the beauty there, is just a snare
That will plague your soul with blight
As no kindness dwells in the empty hell
Within the caverns deep
Where dark and dank, the innards stank
And a vile miasma creeps
So do take care, this place beware
There’s a snare at every turn
Or forsaken cold, in muck and mold
While regret and sorrow churn
There’s no escape, a grave mistake
When the cardinal meets the knife
And to venture there, with love to bear
Your soul, the sacrifice
For, no passion waits, beyond the gate
There’s only ice and snow
And no fire can start the frozen heart
Where the wiles of winter blow
And the lesson learned, your heart to burn
There’s no pity for the pain
When in a flash, it’s burned to ash
Your spirit wears the stain
So do take leave, else to grieve
In the darkness all alone
It’s too late to flee, once you’ve come to see
That the heart is made of stone
