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 Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 1:11 pm
http://animehotaru19.deviantart.com/art/Probably-Punk-Loli-124024100
First (good) picture in awhile! Tell me what'cha think! You can read the description on Deviantart but'cha don't have to. I think the angle of the head and shoulders are a bit off, but otherwise I think it's good!
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:08 pm
i like a lo the desings of the clothes and face, but the legs are pretty short compared to the body
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Evil Captain Jack Sparrow
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:39 pm
I think the legs be a wee bit too short as well ma'am and i dont think you be able to see that much of her pinky smile I have problems with proportions all the time if im tryin to draw if i just draw something that comes to mind it works perfect usually lol
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:23 pm
Does the Japanese say "pinku ro ri desu"? I'm just wondering....
Anyways, I don't think somebody would naturally stand like that. She seems off balance. The design of her clothes is excellent, but her posture really takes it away. The hand should be flat on the table, due to perspective and such. The placement and size of the mouth is a bit odd, maybe you should find a way to fix it (trial and error...). Her legs are short compared to the rest of her body, so if you ran out of room, next time keep in mind to draw out the body so you can fit the whole body on the paper.
To add more depth and realism, give more contrast by shading and darkening lines.
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Evil Captain Jack Sparrow
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 9:18 pm
CloudRouge Does the Japanese say "pinku ro ri desu"? I'm just wondering.... Anyways, I don't think somebody would naturally stand like that. She seems off balance. The design of her clothes is excellent, but her posture really takes it away. The hand should be flat on the table, due to perspective and such. The placement and size of the mouth is a bit odd, maybe you should find a way to fix it (trial and error...). Her legs are short compared to the rest of her body, so if you ran out of room, next time keep in mind to draw out the body so you can fit the whole body on the paper. To add more depth and realism, give more contrast by shading and darkening lines. ...i think the mouth is ok....the mouth is high to show a sorta smug look in anime style!! I'm not sure if she be shooting for that but i think it works
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