To not look like a noob in an RP you MUST not use the *<-- Thats a dead give away... You RP like your reading a book in third person or second person example between to Rpers.....
Rper:1He smiled at her she couldnt look more beautiful then she does now. He twirled her in the school court yard. I must tell her everything why i will not be able to be with her for quite some time. He sighed and held bloom tight, "Bloom?" he said softly with a twinge of concern, holding her tightly.
Rper: 2She looked up at him it was a magical night how can it be so that he had something sad to tell her an such an emotional day and now an emotional night? First she cant graduate because she could complete her enchantix and now what she's losing her boyfriend? He heart pounded, "Yes sky?" She says with her eyes watching him lovingly.
Rper 1:"I have to..." He got cut off, an air ship came down as Storm walked to teh ledge of the open door and ordered me to come. He pleaded for 5 minuets but all he got was 10 seconds he looked at Bloom, "Ill come back Remember i'll always love you." He said as he left.
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Yes i know im very lit on my RP's you dont have to be so lit it could be even a sentance and thats all good so yea. Have fun RPING!
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