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 Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2009 12:15 pm
i like your poem ninja, but i am a bit biased atm to say it is naive, for example i am going through some stuff, and have written about it too. what do you think? its a bit like a yin to your yang...
So here I am....
Sitting here, with you,
ring on my finger,
waiting for those words...
But they never come.
I'm sorry, I love you, I don't want her,
Let's work this out...
So close yet so far away, and
i can't do anything to stop it.
Night comes
and we are next to each other,
hand in hand,
back to back,
sleeping in the same bed,
living in the same house
, and yet
i can't feel you anymore.
What happened to the days that you loved me?
What happened to the days when we were happy?
And why can't we make it work??
All this confusion,
all these lies,
all the mistakes,
left out in the open,
rotting,
evolving into bigger things,
forming into different people,
and yet I can't stop it.
Shall I go?
Shall I stay?
Shall I even speak?
What do you want me to do?
In the dark,
so here I am,
sitting here with you,
ring on my finger,
waiting for those words...
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:56 am
Im going through stuff to and I made this poem to vent some of my feelings twards a certain someone....
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This ocean flows, a ocean of blue
I see my reflection, without you
Why must it always be
That everything I do reminds me of you?
It Reminds me that I'm no longer yours-
Every step leads to another place
This place with these memories are lost and forgotten and tinted in red.
Someone else in my place
Misery is my new name
Its is what I became
And if you were to take me back and if you were to ask.
Everyone knows id turn my back
But sadly You were my first and only love
You robbed me of My best friend, all that I' had left
But your presence crumbled before me
Leaving me broken and lonely
Lost with nowhere and no one to go to
Lost because I am without you
Without you I am lost
Since you've been gone
The reflection I see
Is not of me
At least not who
I used to be;
Friendly and bubbly sweet and kind
But my eyes are now
hollow
Like those of a corpse
Drenched in sorrow
With no remorse
Is this what you wanted? Is this what you've left me to become?
One with the earth its dirt and all its scum?
I'm Torn to pieces
Because I'm not myself
With no heart to feel
Nothing left of me at all
You've robbed me of
My heart, my smile
You've robbed me my innocence
Like the one Within a child.
The one I was.
And what you have taken
Can never be returned
I remain a ghost of myself
But Since you've been gone
I have learned-Because of you
Never can I trust another soul
Never can I open myself up again To a world so cold so god damn cold
And never again will I love the same damn
way That I did.
How can I ever love someone
The way I loved you?
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:07 pm
Im not very proud of this one seeing its kind of a letter to someone but still I think it connects to what im feeling-
xxxxx
Forgive and forget,
That’s what my mom taught me,
At lets that's what she tyred to.
But I can never forgive you for what you did,
Because you broke my heart.
And before I even got the chance
to put myself back together
You broke me.
And when I got new pieces
You broke them,
All over again.
And I can never forget,
Never forgive you
Because it is burned into my mind,
And Its all your fault.
You ask me for forgiveness's
You ask me to forget
But how can I?
You broke my heart into a million pieces,
And squashed them
all over again.
What do you expect?
Do you think it magically heals?
My heart will never be whole after what you did,
All of you expect for me to act like
It never happened
To smile and laugh
Like hell It Ill ******** will always be afraid of getting hurt now,
There will always be that voice in my head,
Warning me
Warning me that I was hurt before,
All because of you
And you expect me to forgive and forget,
Like it never happened,
To just forget
Well that will never happen,
I can Tell you that
Because what you did,
Is forever in my head,
And I cannot,
Forgive
And
Forget
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:32 pm
i have some random haiku's, each new one is a different color and they're all untitled.
Falling gracefully
cold wind brushes them to me
the flawless white flakes
Burning forever
the fire always consumes
tearing apart life
listen, listen now
the winds will whisper to you
and the trees will speak
waves crash against shores
a storm slowly rumbles in
take care dear sailor
the dark surrounds them
always a masking feature
at midnight they'll laugh
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:33 pm
Okay I made this seeing-I got my heart broken and I only let a few people in and talk to them-Here what I tell myself everyday...
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You said you loved me
Then broke my heart in two
You always say "I'm sorry"
I know you never mean it
Seeing you Just walk away laughing with your crew
How could I belive that you cared for me all these years
Now I'm thinking that loving you was a crime
I was a fool
Because maybe I knew that you really didn't care
But I just needed someone to tell me that they'd be there
Now I'm going to stop my crying
Even if I don't want to
And it's starting to tire me out
Crying that I've lost you everyday
So now I'm going to wipe away the tears and hope my memories of you fade away
Make myself hard and cold-Pushing everyone away
Now I think of the day you broke my heart, I'll pull out a chair and sit
And stare out the window thinking,and knowing
I Love You Is 8 letters...But So Is Bullshit
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:13 pm
"Darfur"
It's like it's starting
all over again
the way they treat those
men
and women
children too
dying under the
sky
no longer blue
but stained with
the blood
of the
innocent
men
and women
children too
spilled by the soldiers
who now forgot
what once happened
the holocaust
killing the same
raiding the shops
parading the streets
in a destructive way
destroying all who
try
and stand
in their way
they will not last
to see tomorrow
without the help
of you
and I
to stand up
against
those who take
pleasure
in seeing them
die
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:52 pm
Hello everyone. redface I wrote a poem for my English class a while ago, and I really wanted some feedback. Now that I was invited to this guild, with people who like poetry as well, I was wondering if you could give me some feedback? Please?
Swing, Baby, Swing
Show me that painted smile
Yeah, you beautiful doll
Baby, you’re a great actress
But you couldn’t fool me.
Go home and shut the blinds
Light some candles
Baby, you’re lonely
But you won’t let anyone else see.
A tragically beautiful girl
Why are you all alone
And so angry at the world
When you know you have me?
Swing, Baby, Swing…
Like we did when we were young
From the tree in your backyard
Baby, you’re selfish
And blinded by self hate.
Go up and touch your cheek
This doll has cracks in her face
Baby, you’re so broken
And “I’m sorry” comes too late.
Now wild winds whisper memories
Baby girl, close your eyes
Promise that you will wait for me
At the swing by the gate.
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:26 pm
daximn "Darfur"
It's like it's starting
all over again
the way they treat those
men
and women
children too
dieing under the
sky
no longer blue
but stained with
the blood
of the
innocent
men
and women
children too
spilled by the soldiers
who now forgot
what once happened
the holocaust
killing the same
raiding the shops
parading the streets
in a destructive way
destroying all who
try
and stand
in their way
they will not last
to see tomorrow
with out the help
of you
and I
to stand up
against
those who take
pleasure
in seeing them
die I cant really find and fault with it-Its really good and I found a connection that I cant feel with alot of poems. Good job all in all
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:30 pm
Friends come and go.
But they never stay
They tell you they'd be with you forever then go away
My parents and siblings arn't there
is it so hard to care?
To be fixed you must first be broken.
To speak, you must listen to words spoken
But to be lifted you must first fall.
to understand you have to see it all
s**t happens.
That is life
mistakes are made.
All fixed by a knife?
Forget about the past because it never mattered
Forget about those who left you shattered
Let go of the ones who were never there
Truth be told they really don't care
But now you have people who will risk it all
Who will give there life.
To break my fall
xxxx
Some feed back-I feel like something missing-Anybody?
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 1:04 pm
XxUsagiMaruhiXx daximn "Darfur"
It's like it's starting
all over again
the way they treat those
men
and women
children too
dieing under the
sky
no longer blue
but stained with
the blood
of the
innocent
men
and women
children too
spilled by the soldiers
who now forgot
what once happened
the holocaust
killing the same
raiding the shops
parading the streets
in a destructive way
destroying all who
try
and stand
in their way
they will not last
to see tomorrow
with out the help
of you
and I
to stand up
against
those who take
pleasure
in seeing them
die I cant really find and fault with it-Its really good and I found a connection that I cant feel with alot of poems. Good job all in all thank you ^^ i plan on sending it to one of the associations spreading awareness on the issue.
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:38 pm
All that I ever hear from
them are lies
All they do is create painful memories in my eyes
For people who claim they love me so much
All they do is leave a painful touch
They make me cry
Ripped my heart out with no
Explination why
They lied to me from day one
Now all I can do is run
Their deception cut me one time too many
But they still have plenty
They hurt me my loving 'family'
With nothing more than a mischievious grin
How could they do this to me?
I thought for once I could believe
But I was wrong again.
Why Am I still beliving will be hole again
The question in my mind that keeps raging "When"
When will it stop?
When will I finally stop hoping?
When will god send me the message
"Yeah I do hate you"
But my heart is broken
The very last words have been spoken
And for why does it hurt so badly
That has made me lose my sanity so madly
Well, what would you expect
When the ones who hurt you
Were the ones you thought you could trust the most
My own damn loving "Family"
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