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Red_Water_Angel

PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:09 pm


Here is where you can post your poems. You can also comment other peoples poems to. And you can get help on your poetry. But no being mean ok thanks.

One of myPoems:
Beggar's Heart


Will you take this poor beggar's hand
when I have no wealth nor do I have land?
Will you take this poor beggar's heart
when all I can offer you is a fresh start?

I have nothing but the clothes on my back
and a pile of boxes which I call a shack.
You have the world in the palm of your hand;
all the wealth and grains of sand.

Your noble blood sets us worlds apart
and yet I can't help but wish for your heart.
All I can give are the words I speak
and these feelings that you seek.

My noble lady fair and wise,
would you consider me as a prize?
Out of all the jewels and treasures bound
what hope do I have of being found?

I am but a poor poet wishing for you.
I hold out my hand strong and true
but what are the chances that you'll take
the hand of this poor beggar over a fake?
PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:12 pm


We already have an entie subforum for creativity, this post wil me moved to there soon.

Isobel Bellamy


Red_Water_Angel

PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:15 pm


Isobel Bellamy
We already have an entie subforum for creativity, this post wil me moved to there soon.
Ok lol sorry about that I just joined a few minutes ago.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:18 pm


Red_Water_Angel
Isobel Bellamy
We already have an entie subforum for creativity, this post wil me moved to there soon.
Ok lol sorry about that I just joined a few minutes ago.
I'ts ok, don't worry 3nodding

Isobel Bellamy


Red_Water_Angel

PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:22 pm


Isobel Bellamy
Red_Water_Angel
Isobel Bellamy
We already have an entie subforum for creativity, this post wil me moved to there soon.
Ok lol sorry about that I just joined a few minutes ago.
I'ts ok, don't worry 3nodding
Ok lol ^^
PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 6:13 am


This is one of my poems.
Tell me what you think.
It's not my best though.

Darkness

Life is never what it seems
Gets harder all the time
Some people see you as you are
While other won't see the other side.

I think of all the questions
Like who we are and why
I think of all the times when,
I turn my face and hide.

But whenever this happens
I remember just one thing,
I continue to live because
of the people who would miss me.

pure dark angel


pure dark angel

PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 6:15 am


Will you take this poor beggar's hand
when I have no wealth nor do I have land?
Will you take this poor beggar's heart
when all I can offer you is a fresh start?

This is great imagary
PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:06 pm


pure dark angel
This is one of my poems.
Tell me what you think.
It's not my best though.

Darkness

Life is never what it seems
Gets harder all the time
Some people see you as you are
While other won't see the other side.

I think of all the questions
Like who we are and why
I think of all the times when,
I turn my face and hide.

But whenever this happens
I remember just one thing,
I continue to live because
of the people who would miss me.
This is real good.

Red_Water_Angel


Red_Water_Angel

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:07 pm


pure dark angel
Will you take this poor beggar's hand
when I have no wealth nor do I have land?
Will you take this poor beggar's heart
when all I can offer you is a fresh start?

This is great imagary
thanks.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:32 am


that was a marvelous peom pure dark angel

Aymeriki


SilverMystic13

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 12:42 pm


The ivory is white and pure;
The ebony is black.
The elephant who gave his bones
For beauty won't be back.

Lyrical and soft, I hear
The fingers on the keys.
She plays old hymns to ancient gods
Inside the diocese.

In silence and in mystery,
She drowned her lullaby.
He prayed for salves to heal his wounds,
Not for the last goodbye.

And now that Judgment Day has come,
What ship would dare to sail?
What winds would dare to take them forth
Across the waters pale?

Who dares to sing of ancient ships?
No ships again will flee.
They fled a long, long time ago
Across an ancient sea.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 9:55 pm


I keep getting writer's block so I couldn't finish this poem =/

Look up; see the angel above;
Look up; know that you are not unloved;
Everlasting, ever wanting
Please cease the raining
Of tears of doves and roses' blood

I hope it's not too sucky. I'll try to make a more meaningful post next time
sweatdrop

x__deadsoul


littlewonder

PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:47 pm


I like those first 2 lines.
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