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Eduard Von Adler

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PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:11 pm


so i want to do a comic, but i feel that i need somehting else in my drawings, or is it good enough? if not please feel free to critique me, please give me your opinion

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not shaded... but it would be something simple like any anime
PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:21 pm


backround?


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PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:25 pm


a pattern on the out fit or something?

it's a little blah.
PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:40 pm


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backround?


well this is just the character design of curse i will add background in the comic



Gengi: thanks for the advise ^^ i will think on something

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PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:42 pm


np! ^_^

i know how you feel... alot of the time, i love a character design or idea, but it is lacking to me much of the time.
PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 11:07 pm


Gengi Camichi
np! ^_^

i know how you feel... alot of the time, i love a character design or idea, but it is lacking to me much of the time.


yes gonk i can tell you that i´ve done like 50 sketches of clothes for this one... but this one was the one that i liked most, anyway there are like 15 main characters i have to desing clothes too so for my thinking i will be start to draw in like 2 or 3 months the comic itself xD xD

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PostPosted: Wed May 13, 2009 11:00 pm


I say it's pretty good just add something to the clothes, it's kinda...solid.
Something simple would be good, even a hem or something...
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 3:37 pm


Id agree with the others that something simple yet rather complicated within itself should be added to it. Like some kind of band or hemming with a design on it. overall, i really like the character

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PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 8:41 pm


ok i just need to think what now xD thanks for the advises its been really helpful for this one and for my future designs of the other characters of the comics ^^
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 10:01 am


Honestly I think you give her a bad a** sword or other type weapon and make her like the main character or an irritating rival with seductive qualities. *tell me in a comment if you like that idea! ^_^

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 1:24 pm


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Honestly I think you give her a bad a** sword or other type weapon and make her like the main character or an irritating rival with seductive qualities. *tell me in a comment if you like that idea! ^_^



i was acctually going to do that xD xD its acctually the main character, but its not a bad a** sword its a big Scythe with a floating orb on top xD ((like a magic staff))
PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:19 am


I say it needs shadows. Else it rocks!! blaugh i like the way you draw the eyes, thats hard!

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