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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 8:08 pm
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:15 pm
ok first i like the face, and chaquet, they look good and have good folds, but i suggest you to try your "fold making" in the pants, they look kinda weird also the proportions of the body and perspective, otherwise i like a lot the pose, and for last the hands dont go straight, they have like a curve slighty bigger because of the 2 bones there are on it
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:23 pm
his body shouldnt be facing directly towards us since his leg area is twisted up like that
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