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PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 1:11 am


For the moment, This is the only poem I would like to share with you all... This isn't for you... Lol, but I want to know what you think, I wrote it myself but I hope it actually means something, So what do you think?

Please, My beloved,
Come with me on a big journey to the deepest part of my heart. Any fool could see that we're meant for each other; won't you join me in Artizan and dance with me across the undulating? The wait is too much to bear. Can't we just cast aside the formality of courtship and fly like burning phinox? Rejoice with happiness for just being together, Can't we hold each other, Just for a minute longer... -Bit cry
PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 6:27 pm


It's nice. I only read poetry in my literature classes, but I've read enough to tell what's good. It may not be "amazing" or whatever, but it's a nice poem.

Also, its spelled phoenix. Sorry, the spelling nazi in me had to get that out.

Revo Rayen

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