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i'll lead you to tomarrow [poem] 5/1/09

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lacus889
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PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:44 pm


I'll Lead you To Tomarrow

come with me through the tall damp grass,
dont worry i'll lead the way.
Look, up ahead is where we are headed,
don't worry i'll lead the way.
Don't be frightened i'm right here,
don't be panicked, i'll light your day.
Where's your smile? are you okay?
Please don't cry, I'll be here for your tears.
Please don't sob, We'll be there together.
Hurry. Run. Far away!
They're coming this way!
You can hear the marching up the road, you can see the smoke through the misty snow...
Go! Hurry! I can't lead you now, you'll find your way soon.
I promise, now hurry there isn't much time left,
Go before me and tomarrow will be a better day, a new day, a safe day.
Now go and hurry past those trees, you'll find your way, this is the farthest i can go, but remember me in your new tomarrow, things will never change the way i was with you. I will still be there, just somewhere else. In my better place, i will always lead you.
 
PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:46 pm


lacus889
I'll Lead you To Tomarrow

come with me through the tall damp grass,
dont worry i'll lead the way.
Look, up ahead is where we are headed,
don't worry i'll lead the way.
Don't be frightened i'm right here,
don't be panicked, i'll light your day.
Where's your smile? are you okay?
Please don't cry, I'll be here for your tears.
Please don't sob, We'll be there together.
Hurry. Run. Far away!
They're coming this way!
You can hear the marching up the road, you can see the smoke through the misty snow...
Go! Hurry! I can't lead you now, you'll find your way soon.
I promise, now hurry there isn't much time left,
Go before me and tomarrow will be a better day, a new day, a safe day.
Now go and hurry past those trees, you'll find your way, this is the farthest i can go, but remember me in your new tomarrow, things will never change the way i was with you. I will still be there, just somewhere else. In my better place, i will always lead you.


This poem was inspired by a book i read about World War 1,
it is sort of a story telling how a mother or sister or brother or friend leads you to freedom, but is killed on the way there. It's pretty tragic, but it touched me very deeply.

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PostPosted: Sat May 02, 2009 7:48 am


crying crying crying
once again, you've touched me deeply Lacus-san!
I also really like how your words flow like a never ending river, because those words in your poem left an echoing impression in my mind. ^^


~Yuna~
PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2009 7:56 pm


thanks very much Miss Yuna! ^^

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