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PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:13 pm


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the problem with this one is I absoultley positively think that cheek things i did is wrong.....like in its placement
PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:16 pm


maybe you can try looking at it from a more reality-type of perspective. i mean, she's facing us with her whole front view even though she just got punched on her left cheek. if you're punching someone, shouldn't your body be turned towards them, so only your head will twist sideways?

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PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:32 pm


First off, nice perspective, nice action shot.

As for the cheek, if it's being punched as hard as your characters' poses imply, then it should deform a little in the direction of the impact (in this case, to the right). So her cheek should be curved inwards a little, and the flesh around her eyes and mouth might also be shifted over.
PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:54 pm


so it should be covering her mouth and eye or do i move them over?


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PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:55 pm


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maybe you can try looking at it from a more reality-type of perspective. i mean, she's facing us with her whole front view even though she just got punched on her left cheek. if you're punching someone, shouldn't your body be turned towards them, so only your head will twist sideways?


i know that much but if i drew it that way you wont be able to see the side of the fce that got hit....maybe i should have drawn her body forward
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