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ladyumbra

PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:17 pm


Don't expect this to be all that harsh becuase I love Astan. I find his quirkiness and the tangents and weird thoughts he has in conversations to be refreshing, they should probably never change. It might get him into awkward spots but hey makes for better more realistic rp.

Though he is music themed you should probably make more mention of his day job, it's still a big part of who Astan is and opens up other avenues of rp options for you.

Spark Ideas.
Magicker: You'd have to ditch the bands current Vocalist but a magicker spark with projective empathy, that could make the audience feel what they sing ( not the words but the intended meaning/ feeling) you're supposed to get from the song would be pretty cool and useful. obviously proto stage cannot do this or be seen but could practice honing it's skills until alter. depending on what you did with Varis , the Essentic could actually become his copy and fully replace him so no one ever knows, they just think he got better.

I can't think of anything at the moment but there's a whack of things that could be done spark wise from the construction point of view.
PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 5:09 pm


Stuff to talk about on AIM later, so I don't forget. XD

ladyumbra
Though he is music themed you should probably make more mention of his day job, it's still a big part of who Astan is and opens up other avenues of rp options for you.

Very true. It's sad that I never really thought to expand upon the job he actually makes money doing, but I think that's because I hadn't planned on him doing it forever. A lot of what getting an Essentic was supposed to do for him was help him out of the rut that is his life. A kind of one-third-life crisis, if you will.

ladyumbra
Spark Ideas.
Magicker: You'd have to ditch the bands current Vocalist but a magicker spark with projective empathy, that could make the audience feel what they sing ( not the words but the intended meaning/ feeling) you're supposed to get from the song would be pretty cool and useful. obviously proto stage cannot do this or be seen but could practice honing it's skills until alter. depending on what you did with Varis , the Essentic could actually become his copy and fully replace him so no one ever knows, they just think he got better.

I can't think of anything at the moment but there's a whack of things that could be done spark wise from the construction point of view.


I think that over time, the Roadhogs would become more of a side project, so what I really need to do, I think, is come up with what Astan is going to replace the construction work with as a career and create Sparks based off of that. I really like the Younger Sibling Essentic idea for various reasons and it has no direct job correlation, but I'll bring that up later.

I kind of see Varis and Pig as being necessary for personal life-related conflict, but that could change if the group ever breaks up.

*omnomnoms*
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Smerdle

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EssentialShrimp
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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:11 am


ladyumbra
depending on what you did with Varis , the Essentic could actually become his copy and fully replace him so no one ever knows, they just think he got better.



Why does this sound like 'dropped a bridge on him' XD

Hmmm, nice set of ideas, can still go any which way <3

Lo', and we do love Astan XD Breath of sane fresh air.
PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 8:29 pm


XD Hello there Graf. <3

Yes, Astan is completely sane and will almost certainly stay that way. hehe I need to get him out to meet some of the not-so-sane though. Should be fun fun fun

Smerdle

Scamp

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