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Farrenlock

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:56 pm


Hey all! This thread is to show the basics of what I know. In a way, it can help you improve on expanding your posts and your role play topic. Expanding your posts will give the next poster more to go on. Expanding and putting in good detail for your roleplay creation will attract attention.

Alright then, shall we start?

Lesson 1: Introductions and Fonts

Introductions


I'm sure many of you have found a couple of rpgs that have such a short bio. Why are they so short? Some people find it hard to create a long enough introduction or they don't know much about their topic.

Here's a few steps you should take note on:

1.) If you don't know much about your topic or what you want in the role play, plan it out and do a little research. (especially do research if the role play is fan-based) You can browse on the internet or look though books. You can plan out your role play by using a simple outline. (A Lesson on Outlining will come soon!)

2.) Once you've got your information, try to be creative and make at least a one paragraph introduction.

3.) In your introduction, give a brief description of the surroundings and state what the role play is about. (Such as appearance of towns, clothing worn, and life style)
By giving the time era and life style, a role player can have a better understanding and feeling for how the story is supposed to go.

4.) Make your explanations clear and viewable to your readers! The Role players must be able to picture what's happened in their head. On another note, the start of the role play must catch the readers eye otherwise they'll pass right by the thread without a second thought.

5.) Try hard to make your sentences clear with good grammar! I know it might be hard, but the internet is huge and it is a reliable resource to help your grammar. Helpful sites are:
Dictionary.com, Wikipedia, and Ask.com

Another helpful tool is MicroSoft Word. (This program highlights any bad uses of grammar and tries to explain how to fix the mistakes.)



The Uses of Bold and Italics

You might have seen a couple of role players (Me for example) use the bold and italics for quotes or for when a character is deep in thought. Why do role players use these tools? It's so we can separate the character's actions. If everything is plain normal text, it might get confusing. Some people might pass by the quote without realizing or they think the character is speaking out loud instead of thinking.

Here's an example of the correct way on using bold and italics:

"Used to it is all...I'm not too big in being part of huge groups...What might seem small to you is big to me" Yazaki said calmly. She looked down at her food and poked at it a little more. Still, it didn't look appetizing. "Can't say I've read it before...But why did you say replace the black students with vampires?" she asked reluctantly. She peered up at the group then paused at seeing the strange liquid again. "...Interesting..." Yazaki muttered quietly to herself. "Normally, juice doesn't stick to the bottle" she thought while examining the water jug.

"What type of juice is that?" she asked Rikku while watching the red mixture being guzzled.


Here's an example of when bold and italics are not in use:


" I can conquer to that. Cia did most of the work, but I feel like I got ran over by a cement truck!" Tohru complained. "It was so..." she argued in responses to him while playfully sticking her tongue out at him. She made a fake pout, then made a small devious grin.

Tohru sunk into the water and used her wings to create a small wave of water. The wave soon crashed over Talon, and followed by it was Tohru who was just laughing about the whole ordeal. She didn't quite understand her playful mood and wondered if Cia had gotten into the wine when she wasn't in control of her body. She also wondered if it was medication or perhaps the relief of feeling free of worries and fusses. Whatever the cause, she felt better then she had before.


(Isn't it a bit difficult to see the quote in this jumbled up mess?)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:04 pm


Lesson 2: Outlines and Character Feeling


Outlines


A outline is a planned out piece from start to finish. You might remember using these when taking a journalism class or during Language Arts. Use a outline for your story on your hand-made role play. It will prove useful when creating plot lines.

Here's a example of a outline:

1. Introduction
(In one or two sentences, tell the readers what your role play is about.)

2. Supporting Paragraph/Paragraph 1 –
(Find information or place your first subject to talk about in this supporting detailed area.)


Supporting Paragraph 2 –
(Find information or place a second subject to talk about in this supporting detailed area.)


Supporting Paragraph 3 –
(Find information or place a third subject to talk about in this supporting detailed area.)

3. Conclusion
(During your conclusion, you restate what your writing piece is about and a give a brief summary of all three details in one or two sentences)


Review: Questionnaire


In order to make a successful outline, you must look over the outline carefully before posting it. Ask yourself these questions:

1.) Would you want to join this role play if someone else created it?
2.) Is the story too complex?
3.) Is my grammar to the best of my ability?
4.) Is my story too long or too short?
5.) How can I make my role play stand out from all the others?

If you can answer these questions with a positive feeling, then you're on your way to the top!
smile


Character Feeling


Look, I know what your thinking. This is a weird subject to go over!
True, it is, but for some reason a few people stir away from their character's real personality at the very start of the role play.

Still not catching on? Well, look below:


User Name: Kit Katy
Character Name: Farren Crova
Race: Vampire
Age: 213
Personality:
Farren is normally silent and brooding about the past. Because of her family losses, she sticks to a deep depression. Thus, she's sensitive and very emotional.
Collar: Violet/Dark blue
Type of Master: She doesn't wish for any owner, but if she obtained one she'd prefer someone that's understanding and kind. She also wouldn't mind someone that's more like her.
Bio: (Read the Intro for most her bio)
"I've gone through many trials and many masters but none see me as useful so I'm sent back to the market constantly." Quote by Farren Crova.
Appearance: Farren Crova

My character is suppose to be the brooding and silent type. She's distant from the world because of trauma in her earlier life. This would be a example of how my character would act on regular bases:

Farren stared soberly out of the cage. Her plastered frown and emotionless eyes followed the masters that walked around each slave. It had been so long since one of these beings took her in. She guessed that everyone was sickened by her. They must hate her for the race she is. Not that Farren truly cared. She hated the idea of someone owning her. She hated being near these strange people. But...This was life, and Farren began to deal with it..
Tucking in her knees, she stared miserably at the ground until a shadow hovered over her.
Her eyes grew wide and she instantly jerked her body away from the looming shadow.

Here's an example of how my character shouldn't act in the beginning of the rp:

Farren stared out of the cage bars with a hopeful smile on her face. Excitement filled her as she waited for her new owner to arrive. She didn't completely understand why no one wanted her, but she ignored the pondering. All she wanted was to be accepted and she'd do anything to do so! "Hi Mister!" she'd call out to any of the slave masters. Farren goofily waved her hand to get the people's attention.


Note:

The reason that you shouldn't have your character acting too differently from your profile description is because it's confusing and a bit too out of character. Being a little out of character during a dramatic situation is alright or having a reason to follow the character change in character.

The point to creating a strange character that's different from yourself is to act. Act is the key word! Your playing a role of a character that might have a different personality than you.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:08 pm


(If you have any questions, comments, or anything else then you may reply. At the moment, I haven't added anything to this guide.)
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 1:17 pm


[This was a SMALL guide? Ide hate to see a large one]

Marie the Fallen


LillianSaire
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PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 3:53 pm


(There is a guide here that is two pages long, and a guide or two with a higher word count. But that isn't to that that this is or isn't small, just a comparison.)
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 5:55 pm


LillianSaire
(There is a guide here that is two pages long, and a guide or two with a higher word count. But that isn't to that that this is or isn't small, just a comparison.)

[Im aware. it was a joke.]

Marie the Fallen


summoora

PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:34 am


great overview!
one thing i would change though:
Conclusions can be handicapping to a lot of introductions because people already have that information, and its awkward to write. I would suggest making your conclusions based on what you have written, but more designed to encourage synthesis. a hook, if you will.
here is an example of what i mean:
[very bad example at short notice]
the grass is green, the people are nice, and every third person has wings and a crooked nose due to a spell casted 1500 years ago by a dragon-fairy-elf-witch that is 58409376809 years old but only looks 16. The normals are racist against the wingies, a derogatory term used to degrade them.

the druids of agatheron are rising. which side will you be on? There is good and bad, and the magic and power of the universe hangs in the balance. Fighting for what's right may mean suicide if you act alone. etc etc

really bad conclusion too, but what i mean is something like that as opposed to

and to conclude, the people are great, but racist, and there are wings and a lot of numbers!

you see what im saying?
PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:18 pm


Thoughts in quotation marks?

You're doing it rong.

Orange Chus


LillianSaire
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:20 pm


Would you please explain what is incorrect?
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