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Do you consider yourself an artist of some sort?
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Aethiana

PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 6:11 am


Bob_the_evil_Faerie
Why is this not a sticky anymore ?? o.O

gonk I thought I lost the thread at first!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 6:13 am


joronica2
as they hapend to have peopple chang and in chu wich hapend to pass bi there training places without getting killed bi spears into there backs and magaged to watch so tey copyed well infact they became better than the guckno and ninjano combined
they lerned to fight secret fasster anyone beffore or affter bi the tiem one day into the war the white rose pink pedel kingdom and the empire of watter hade atelad a duzen added up in fact they were so good that lamost knew abotu infact so good that almost knows about them the monk walks down back into his land and and up the mound that he calles home but instead wlaks at all ends of the cliff to only discover that the kigdom of everything good about love developed a defence against just walking in that way his men killed half of the viligiers of the viligers of there only vilage thou the maps of one artist was to be retrived in an hour the alchmist monk shot bi an arow and looses the philsoophers stone int he ground the place where babilion is on rogain the fight last long but quite short as the the burnt down reuins are invaded bi a large army the palce get caprtured and the prince swiftly walks leeting down the robes that would these days be coemtned to look like robes only giano would ware

Please, check a dictionary for spelling? I can hardly read it; barely able to understand. I appreciate your efforts, but I can't help you edit your story since I don't understand what most of the words are meant to be...

Aethiana


Bob_the_evil_Faerie

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 10:34 am


Aethiana
Bob_the_evil_Faerie
Why is this not a sticky anymore ?? o.O

gonk I thought I lost the thread at first!

would you like me to make it a sticky again? I don't see any record of how it stopped being a sticky
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 12:03 pm


I have a poem. It's about my breakup. Maybe I'll post it later.

I'm fine for those who are wondering, btw. I'm over it.

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asdfasdf22

PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 4:28 pm


Aethiana
joronica2
as they hapend to have peopple chang and in chu wich hapend to pass bi there training places without getting killed bi spears into there backs and magaged to watch so tey copyed well infact they became better than the guckno and ninjano combined
they lerned to fight secret fasster anyone beffore or affter bi the tiem one day into the war the white rose pink pedel kingdom and the empire of watter hade atelad a duzen added up in fact they were so good that lamost knew abotu infact so good that almost knows about them the monk walks down back into his land and and up the mound that he calles home but instead wlaks at all ends of the cliff to only discover that the kigdom of everything good about love developed a defence against just walking in that way his men killed half of the viligiers of the viligers of there only vilage thou the maps of one artist was to be retrived in an hour the alchmist monk shot bi an arow and looses the philsoophers stone int he ground the place where babilion is on rogain the fight last long but quite short as the the burnt down reuins are invaded bi a large army the palce get caprtured and the prince swiftly walks leeting down the robes that would these days be coemtned to look like robes only giano would ware

Please, check a dictionary for spelling? I can hardly read it; barely able to understand. I appreciate your efforts, but I can't help you edit your story since I don't understand what most of the words are meant to be...
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 4:31 pm


that took some effort to write im not a hoxor or leet person

asdfasdf22


Aethiana

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 10:11 pm


joronica2
that took some effort to write im not a hoxor or leet person

I can't even begin to translate it, other than it starts with an 'e'...

PostPosted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 5:01 am



One of my many recent...



Torment
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A merry-go-round
At the children's playground.
"Can we play, mummy?"
"Go ahead honey, but do
Take care, I'll be at the shops."

But round and round it goes
Caught up with the flow
Spinning, spinning,
Downward spiralling,
Screams.

"Let me get off, please,
Please, let me get off."
Stop, stop, stop, the cry
Goes unheard, unheeded;
Softly laughing,

They look on, monkey grins
Stretched upon their faces,
And helpless, chained,
Clinging on, praying;
Fearing.

How I wished, in that time
Of agonizing terror
That someone'd come and
Stop the demons, letting me
Go free...

Aethiana


Bob_the_evil_Faerie

Sparkly Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 10:09 pm


Thats is a god poem. I like it. Good play of words.
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