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Kiua_theforgotten Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:48 am
Anyone here write poetry? Are you a poet and don't know it? Do you like to rhyme all the time? Then post here!
I have a poem that I just wrote yesterday that I would like to share. It's for my boyfriend, Cervantas.
You're something special to me
You bring out all I'm supposed to be
When I'm with you, everything just comes together
Maybe this will last forever?
This happiness? This love?
This feeling of soaring like a dove
I know we can't see the future
So let's give this a chance
Just take my hand, let's try this dance
I love you, baby, I truly do
I hope you can make all my dreams come true
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:47 pm
I love writing poetry, but I hate reading it in front of people (I get so emotional in my poems, and I either burst out laughing or crying).
However, this is the internet, so I feel no shame.
In real life, I am a cheery person, but my poems usually reveal a dark side of me that no one really knows.
... this isn't a really dark poem though. It's not even a good one.
I had to do an English assignment where I had to write a poem but incorporate some lines from Hamlet into the poem. This is the utterly crappy result...
*Shakespeare's lines will be italicized.
Death Row
We all know what I did.
You say I must pay for my sins,
But is revenge worth your soul?
Hang me, poison me, cut off my head,
Nothing will remove me from your memory.
To end the life of one who ended a life, does it really make sense?
You will continue to suffer even after I depart,
Unless you learn the truth. My truth.
You claim that what I did was horrible, a sin, but in reality
There is nothing either good or bad - but thinking makes it so.
What I did changed your world, but you do not see
I made your existence worthwhile.
I made you question your faith.
I made you act and react.
I made you think about why we live and die.
I made you who you are now.
Remove my shackles, I am not resisting the call.
I recognize my fate.
All that lives must die,
Passing through nature to eternity.
I know my truth, do you know yours?
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:51 pm
Ohwow. O_O; Both of those are really good.
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 5:44 pm
I wrote this a while back/recently.
You know me well enough to know
that whatever I show you nobody
else will see. I've grown to embrace
your warm glow instead of the cold
that I've surrounded myself with for
so long. You've given me this peice
of you to hold onto, and I need you
to know that I always hold it close to
me as tightly as possible. You have
seen me at my best and my absolute
worst, so let me be the first to tell
you- as I fall to my knees with warm
tears streaming down my cheeks-
that you are my world and you are
all I will ever need and you are the
number one thing worth saving,
and I'd give anything to keep things
this way. So please remember. Remember
everything.
Please remember all of
the secrets I kept with you, remember
me as the one who never left you
broken and lifeless. When you open
your eyes I want to be the first thing
you see. I want you to know that I
will remember you as someone I
hold so dear to me. I've seen how
deeply you care for me and it's
something I could never forget, and
for this I don't fear anything and I
know there is nothing more to regret
in this lifetime. Baby, will you remember
me as the one who would whisper
sweetly to you in the dark? Will
you remember me as forever yours?
In case I haven't told you before, and
I am sure that I have, I want to tell you
that I will forever adore you. Please
remember all of the things we have
accomplished together and did I ever
tell you that. . you gave this Angel his
wings?
FIN.
Copyright (C) 2009
A. Ramirez
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 10:50 am
This a poem that I made up, it won't make much sense too people because it is based on a story that I created biggrin It's about Dark Elves
"Beneath the ancient Borunites,
in Agdor do we dwell,
living our lives in perpetual twilight,
some they call it hell,
none do dare enter,
for they know the stories well,
for those who enter Agdor,
had best have said their farewell’s "
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2009 1:13 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:29 pm
There's a certain way
that the world is
supposed to be, but I'm
currently not seeing
it. I'm supposed to
be in a certain realm
at a certain time.
What is supposed to be
so clear is a complete
blur, because you
see my heart is burning. The
world is turning in
the opposite direction.
What is a person in my
positon to do? And so
as I'm laying here,
I'm in constant fear.
I'm in a constant state
of flux, and there's a voice
in my head telling me "You're
so ********."
There's a
laughter in the air
because I know not
where I am, only
I know I'm supposed
to be somewhere else.
Supposed to be above
and beyond. Let me
see. My heart is burning.
I can feel my existance
fading- fading along
with my sense of
awareness. I'm not
aware. Only I'm there
but I'm so numb, and for
some this is so completely
fun. So decievingly
divine. I could tell
you that I'm fine
but even I'm not
sure. The inside of my
neck burns, and as
I breathe it gets worse.
"My friend, you are ******** (c) 2009
A. Ramirez
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:22 pm
Your poem is very lovely. I could get all the feelings from it. I've been there. With the confusion and not knowing where to go and such like that. Wonderful job.
This poem I wrote is called, "If You Ask Me."
If you ask me were there feelings?
I’ll say they were always
If you ask me if he needs me
The answer is maybe
Only he knows that answer, as you can see
If you ask me does he make my heart pound?
I’ll say, “Listen for yourself.”
If you ask me what I need
I need my good health
For he makes me feel weak
If you ask me is he a friend
I’ll say “yes, but something more.”
If you ask me is he cute?
He’s someone I adore
I can’t get him off my mind
If you ask me do I like him?
Just take a clue
If you ask me I need him
The answer is I do
If you ask me if I care
I’ll give you a stare
I’ll always have him
He will always be there
He makes me smile
My life means much more; while…
Does he know?
If you ask me that
I’ll say he does
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Kiua_theforgotten Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:18 pm
I can word a mean rhyme when given time. whee
Though the poem lack the flash, I don't do morbid dance. Take a look and read along. And please comment on my poem song. *Note it is not really song. Plus I don't have a title for this yet.*
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Untitled
I sat in the back
Observing
The rhythm, lies, and stories
I stood in the dark
Listening
Silent depressing, aching heart, and loud eyes
I danced on the stage
Telling
Brilliant Sunshine, quite nights, and open hunger
I walked the fenced road
Smelling
Known wonders, tragic heroes, and quite bees
I laid down in sorrowful light
Sensing
Blinding colours, noiseless thunder, and endless paths
I dropped into the ground
Knowing
Empathy
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:43 pm
i just started to write poems...but im not soo good, my first poem sucks, oh well, id like u ppl to give me a critic so here it is my first poem.
cover my eyes, i just want to dream.
cover my eyes, i want to live in darkness.
if you cover my eyes, i will feel you,
cause you are pure darkness.
i want to dream about you,
i want to live in you,
and feel you sorrounding my body
in a lovely hug of darkness,
feel the coldness of your lips and the warmth
of your heart.
i want you to cover my eyes,
kiss me when i cant see,
make me feel inmortal, drinking of the life
that your body emanate.
cover my eyes, let me feel you,
let me love you.
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