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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:16 am
CHAPTER 1 Burnt down
the night was dark the villige of holima at rest....... But then they came out of nowhere. the METRA army they wanted the orb so they burned down houses herd of the where abouts of the orb Sosuke ( the soon to be hero ) had the orb ... it was a funny story really ........ but well tell that later.. he saw the orb glowing and he herd shirks of terror ....(now im stuck PLZ help)
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:58 pm
well, what's the plot? what's supposed to be happening? Or what's going to happen in the future?
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