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 Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 9:37 pm
I wrote this poem and I was wondering if somebody, anybody would like this..
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Do you see these scars?
Do you remember my love?
Do you remember my tears?
These scars are my emotional scars.
This blood I shed for you.
These tears fall for you.
This smile fades for you.
These scars are my emotional scars.
Do you see it?
Do you know what you did to me?
Do you know the pain you put me through?
I know you don't, you never did.
You would always scoff.
You would always laugh.
My love was never good enough.
And now I show you my emotional scars.
This is better than you.
As this razor mutilates my arms.
Tears up my veins.
Letting this blood fall on the floor.
I know this pain, its all to familiar.
But it is my life.
"Don't do this anymore," You say.
As you wrap your arms around me.
But you don't care,
You just don't want the guilt.
You don't want to be responsible for what might happen.
And as I cry in your shoulder.
Thats what makes it hurt most.
Thats what makes these my emotional scars.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:55 am
Listen, if you're that hurt inside, I can offer my time to hear your heart's pain. PM me if you want to let it out. I think nobody has the right to hurt anybody like that.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:30 pm
Lord Shikharys Listen, if you're that hurt inside, I can offer my time to hear your heart's pain. PM me if you want to let it out. I think nobody has the right to hurt anybody like that. Oh, this isn't how I really feel, but thank you so much for the offer!
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:51 pm
Muffin Says:
This is.. Amazing.
The words struck a familiar cord in my heart of hearts, and.. It was just very powerful, I really enjoyed reading it.
That sounds horrible. Enjoying reading something this pain filled.. But yeah. Anyways. Really, really liked it.
Really.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:25 pm
The first part reminds me of Dark Heart.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:19 pm
The Holographic Muffin Muffin Says:
This is.. Amazing.
The words struck a familiar cord in my heart of hearts, and.. It was just very powerful, I really enjoyed reading it.
That sounds horrible. Enjoying reading something this pain filled.. But yeah. Anyways. Really, really liked it.
Really.
Thank you so much! That means so much to me!
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:22 pm
Shallarinath The first part reminds me of Dark Heart. Lol.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:59 pm
sweeteverafter7 Shallarinath The first part reminds me of Dark Heart. Lol. Lol? Dark Heart isn't very lol-ish by nature, he's more like 'how can anyone love a monster, a murderer, like me?' in nature.
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