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GTA Fanfic, Claude Speed, Need Beta. [Contains Spoilers]

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:40 pm


This is a GTA fanfic I wrote a long time ago.. If anyone would like to be my beta, I also need some characterisation help for certain GTA characters, please PM me. I realize that my story needs some revamping and my writing skills lack.

I'm thinking about putting in light slash.. but it isn't going to be with any GTA character besides Claude. xD

Clean Slate


Summary
Claude attempts to start an honest life, but before he can, he'll have to take care of a few problems.

Prologue
Maria stood in front of him, her manicured hands preoccupied with what seemed to be a suitcase in her left hand and a 9mm handgun in her right hand. Gripping and pointing the handgun in his direction, she coldly said.

"Sorry fido, but a girl's got needs."

Suddenly Claude understood, as if an anvil suddenly dropped on his tired mind and body. Suprisingly though, he didn't feel anything at the betrayal, almost as if he was expecting it.

And so, Maria left with all his money, running out of the apartment they used to share and he just stood there silently, not even bothering to go after her for revenge. Even before Maria's sudden betrayal, he was asking himself why he didn't feel happy. He had everything, the infamy, the money and the girl (albeit an annoying one that never shuts up). He sighed, suddenly feeling very tired. He felt tired, just tired of betrayal, blood, and money. He sat on his couch, his head in his hands. Maybe it was time, that he give up being a criminal, so he didn't have to deal with this crap on a daily basis. He imagined himself starting a new life, working honestly. He mind-laughed at the thought, but then he slowed down his mind and thought about it seriously. Could he do it? Could he find some redemption for everything he's done? There was just a slight problem though. He was the most wanted man in Liberty City. Practically every gang in the city wanted him dead, no matter where he planned to go, they would surely hire assassins to find and kill him. Contemplating his dilema, he stood up and walked out the door, planning to visit an old acqaintance.

Chapter 1

Driving through the tunnels in a blue Landstalker, he brooded about the events that led him to his current situation. Blurs of various colored cars rushed passed his face. It was almost noon now.

Flashback

Exiting his apartment and going down to his personal garage, Claude looked for his favorite red-coated banshee. As the garage door slowly pulled up, only a bare wall stood in front of him. Cursing his stupidity and a certain someone, he forcefully kicked his gray garage wall out of frustration. Only one thought crossed his mind. 'Maria.' It was his favorite car and she had to take that too. He wanted to punch the next person that came around the street corner. In fact, that's what he did. As soon as a car rolled in his 'jacking radar', he went up to it's driver's side and pulled it's blue door open. He punched and then forcefully pulled the person in the driver's seat out of his car and into the hard pavement. It was so easy, seriously, when will Liberty City citizens learn how to lock their doors? Besides, the guy he took this car from probably won't miss it, since he lives in Shoreside Vale, the guy was probably rich. He can afford another one, while he, Claude on the other hand, just became broke. He quickly got in and drove off, not even looking back. What? There’s no official rule that stated he had to immediately start a new and honest life, but it made him wonder if he really wanted to repent.. he would have to work on it later on. For now, he had to concentrate on surviving.

End Flashback


The landstalker passed a sign. It pointed to the right, saying 'Staunton'. Claude continued along the darkly lit tunnels, going in the direction needed. After a few minutes, he finally reached Portland. As he rushed passed the end of the tunnel, bright light hit his face. He drove at the speed of light, ok, maybe that was exadurating things a bit, but he drover fast enough to avoid gangs using him as target practice. Reaching his destination, he pulled up in front of 8-Ball's Bomb shop. He got out of the car, slamming the door shut. As he got out, he walked to the front door of 8-Ball's humble home and knocked.

The door abruptly opened. A bald dark skinned man in a jacket with 8-Ball logo slapped on the back of the jacket and jeans stood there. He had a surprised expression on his face. He was surprised to see an all too familiar man in a normal black bomber jacket and green cargo pants on his doorstep. He signaled for Claude to enter his home. Once Claude entered he quickly shut the door and sat down on his couch, while Claude leaned against a wall with his arms crossed next to him.

"Yo man, haven't heard from you in a while, what the hell's been going down? I heard most of the gangs in Liberty City hate your guts now" the dark skinned man blurted out.

Claude struggled to find a pen and some paper. He kept making signs at 8-Ball indicating for a pen and paper.

"Oh, right, I've never heard you talk, I just figured that you didn't like to talk, are you mute?" 8-Ball asked.

Claude gave him an irritated look that said 'DUH', but proceeded to nod. 8-Ball handed Claude a pen and paper. Pen in hand, Claude began to write down everything that had happened to him up to this point. He started with Catalina betraying him and then moved on to others. From the mafia betraying and trying to assassinate him with a car bomb, to him assassinating Salvatore Leone, to him joining the Yakuza, to Catalina kidnapping Maria, to him taking out a sh** full of Cartel, to rescuing Maria, to Maria's betrayal and how he was planning to start a new life. After he had finished writing, the mute offered 8-Ball his life story in Liberty City. Nodding, 8-Ball took the piece and proceeded to finish reading it.

"Damn man, that's rough, you know I don't chose who I do business with, right? It's unfortunate that one of my cars almost blew you up, but it was nothing personal, you know. So, what do you want from me?"

Claude began to write his response. Once he was finished, the piece of paper read "I know. You owe me, I saved your life, if it wasn't for me you would've been caught by the cops and sent back to jail in another prison convoy. I need your help to disappear, I was thinking of maybe borrowing some money and if you have anything else that could help me, I'd appreciate it"

As 8-Ball read the piece of paper, 8-Ball raised his hands in mock defense.

"I know, I know. I owe you. Damn man, you get all the b***hes. I think I have a friend that can help you with your problem though, just come back tomorrow at around 9:00AM to 12:00AM, aight?" 8-Ball replied, feeling slightly amused but still showed signs of sympathy towards Claude.

Claude nodded, quickly wrote a thank you letter and gave it to him. Claude then proceeded to go back to his car and drive off to his first safe house. He pulled up in a dark corner, and then looked up to a sign that said 'Eddie's'. He parked his car into his safe house garage and then went inside to rest up for tomorrow.

Fast Forward to the Next Day

Claude drifted out of darkness and groggily woke up to find himself in his old safe house. He felt slightly paranoid that 8-Ball would betray him. He's been betrayed so many times that he could'nt help but feel slightly paranoid. He kind of felt sort of sad, but that was life.. and it wasn't like he was a complete saint either, he betrayed and killed Kenji, a potential loyal ally, for money, for money that didn't even make him happy in the end. He smirked at his hypocrisy, but he regretted it now, wondering if this is what Kenji would've felt if he knew that it was Claude who had betrayed him. Although he regretted taking Kenji's life, there wasn't anything he could do about it now.. He then squashed the slightly morbid thoughts begginning to creep into his head and like an iron hammer smashing down, he contemplated them no longer.

As he got up, he grabbed his black bomber jacket and put on his green cargo pants. As he was putting his cloths on, he thought about his choice of cloths. He seriously needed a new wardrobe, it's no wonder gangs would immediately recognized him when he strolled near their territory. He considered changing his hairstyle and having plastic surgery, but he liked his hairstyle and he liked the way he looked, he was far from narcissistic though, well, in his opinion, besides, he didn't have enough money for plastic surgery and it would require for him to fill some medical documents to get plastic surgery.

Claude then went outside and then got into his car. At about the same speed he drove yesterday, he navigated he streets until he parked near Ammunation. He stepped inside and bought a handgun with the little money he had left. It wasn't much, but it was enough to kill someone with one shot. It helped to be prepared. Claude paid the clerk the money he owed and then got back into his car; He drove towards 8-Ball's Bomb Shop. Arriving at his destination, he got out of the car and knocked on 8-Ball's front door. 8-Ball opened the door and motioned for Claude to come inside, welcoming the his silent companion. As Claude got inside he noticed a brown haired light skinned man in a suit staring at him and in turn, Claude stared at him.

"Hey man, this is a friend of mine, his name's Mike Toreno." 8-Ball's deep voice suddenly cut through his mind.

Toreno stood up and held out his hand to Claude.

"A pleasure to meet you, mister Speed." Toreno said.

Startled, Claude hesitantly took Toreno's hand. Claude felt uneasy around the man, how the hell did this guy know his last name, hell.

"Sweet here," Toreno motioned his hands in 8-Ball's direction. "has told me all about your little problem." he continued. "I've heard of your little adventures. I'm sure I can help you with your problem, but it's going to cost you." he finished.

Claude smirked, and then pulled out the pen and paper 8-Ball gave to him yesterday. On it, he wrote. " Figures. Sweet?"

8-Ball then replied. "It's an old nickname of mine. My real name's Sean Johnson"

The Liberty City Reaper vaguely remembered a name through his many memories. He figured it was probably another person though, because there were a lot of people with the last name Johnson.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 11:24 am


I plan on editing the dates and location to include the year, month, day and specific locations later. Feedback, what can I improve on?


Chapter 2

"Here's what I want you to do, I want you to kill everyone in the folder I'm about to give you, I've already provided you with sufficient firepower to do this. After you read through the documents, take the blue rumpo van parked outside; Some guns, gernades, toxins and disguises are already waiting for you in the back. My employers have an extreme dislike for paper trails, they want this done as discreetly as possible. This might take a while. Do what you need to, Speed. After you've completed your task, come back here to meet me, I'll be waiting for you every Sunday, same time today." finished Toreno.

Nodding, Claude stuffed his trusty pen and paper into his jacket pocket. The imperialist stepped forward and held out a manila folder to him. Grabbing the files with his right hand, Claude proceeded to skim through the documents within the folder. He could recodnize some faces, while others didn't seem to register in his mind. Surprise took hold of the mutes face as he finished looking; Toreno had just given him a list of every major gang/mafia leader, plus their equally dangerous associates in the city. Understanding the content, he closed the asorted files and place it under his armpit. A few awkward seconds later, he hesitatingly moved towards the door and opened it. The mute was half-way between the inside and outside; Before stepping out, he gave the occupants of the house a quick salute.

The mysterious man watched the infamous Reaper's trademark bomber jacket and cargo pants dissappear. As soon as the door slammed shut, the CIA agent activated the tiny radio inserted into his ear.

"Masterson, have you found our friend?" Toreno spoke into the receiver.

Mike Toreno never claimed to be a good guy. He had big plans for this city, he had been scheming this ever since certain gangs had taken over the murder capital. Speed came to him just in the nick of time. Toreno could never pass up a good opportunity. The aging man thought about why he was being generous enough not to screw the hitman over, like he did others; He chalked it up to becoming softer in his old age and guilt. That, and the fact that Claude had rescued Sweet.

Earlier in Octobre, Sweet had gotten himself sentenced to jail, being convicted on 85 counts of owning a gun without a license. Upon hearing the news, he immediately divised and set out to execute his plan a few days after. Following Sweet's sentence, he had arranged for a certain oriental gentleman to come to America. Under a disguise and an alias, he had been feeding Donald Love bits of information in order to gain favor. Also, for months he had used Love to his advantage, sabotaging a few foreign government and criminal operations here and there. He knew the real estate tycoon wasn't as innocent he portrayed himself as. Contacting Donald Love once again, he then convinced Love that the oriental gentleman was important, backing it up with 'secret' government files. The agent was worried about how Sweet would be able to get himself out, his hands were messed up pretty bad the last time he had seen the bomb expert. Luckily, Speed had been there when he was needed. He owed it to a certain deceased gangster to take care of his older brother and in turn, owed it to Speed for saving the former GSF member's a**.

Soon, every gang in Liberty City would be in chaos.. leaving him open to take control. Jesus, he sounded like a cardboard cutout of a cartoon villain. He thought about adding evil laughter just for the dark humor effect, but thought against it, as amusing as it would be.... he currently had more pressing matters to finish.

Portland Docks
"Yes Sir, I'm about to talk to him."

"Mister Russo, I presume?" A man in pedestrian clothes adressed a seemingly homeless man.

"What do you want?" The voice replied raspily. The owner of the voice sounded exactly as he looked. A dirty coat hung off of him, authenticating his poverty. His face expressed exhaustion, weariness and melancholy as he looked at the man before him.

"I have an offer for you."

Staunton
As usual, the mute drove in silence. The man gripped the wheel tightly, contemplating the task he was given. Being ordered to take out the major Gang Leaders certainly seemed suspicious; Toreno radiated warning signs and gave off creepy vibes the moment he had been introduced. He wondered if trusting this Toreno character was the smartest thing to do. Probably not, but that's never stopped him from completing a job before...

This mission would be a challenge and his chances of survival in the aftermath of what he was about to attempt, were slim. Should he be around for the aftermath of what he was about execute, he would have a hard time moving from place to place in the city. He would have to plan this carefully.

There were currently 7 major gangs in the city, he had already taken out two gang leaders, Kenji and Catalina. Miguel could rot in hell for all he cared. It was a shame.. but Asuka had perished in the crossfire between him and his ex-girlfirend. Claude had liked Asuka despite her odd fetishes, if she were alive today, he would've spared her from death. Last time he checked, the Yakuza had slowly began to lose influence over Staunton; the Columbian Cartel were in the same boat as well.

He would start with the harder ones first. Claude went through a series of neighboorhoods before finally arriving at his safe house in Staunton. In reverse, he parked the massive vehichle just beside his garage. The Liberty City Reaper got up from his seat and went to the back, taking the list of gang leaders with him. Beside him, an assortment of equipement was wrapped in multiple garbage bags. Hands reached out to check the stuff he could use. In the plastic fabric, he found a variety of gang attires and masks, along with the regular stock of weaponry.

Still in the back, Claude flipped open the manila folder again, scanning the documents for suitable targets. He organized the files by who was easier to kill and who was harder. Eventually, he came upon a chinese man. The picture stared at him, as if accussing him of something.. A nagging feeling welled up inside of him, tightening around his stomach for good effect. The mute had almost forgotten why he was doing this. He cut off this feeling, choosing not to dwell on it any longer. Again, he scoffed at his hypocrisy and a self-depreciating smirk graced his lips. So much for redemption. He told himself that living life on the run didn't seem to be much of a life, this may be his only chance to make a fresh start, assuming that Toreno or 8-Ball wouldn't betray him.

At first, he thought about going after his former boss but then cut off the thought as he didn't exactly look chinese; disguises could only do so much. The Leones weren't a family to be openly triffled with. After some moments of anylising information, he decided that the leader of the triads would be the first to face a death sentence. Claude hoped that the triads would do his work for him.

The Next Day, Night
The ominous atmosphere was enough to suffocate the streets. Strands of the cool air softy carressed his cheeks as he peeked through the scope of his rifle. The crosshair lined up against the face of his target, who was at the entrance of a chinese restauraunt, armed and surrounded by three bodyguards. Earlier, he had asked 8-Ball to fix him up a detonatable bomb. Making sure there were no triads that could see him and disguised as a mafia member, he attatched it just underneath the steel pipes. As soon as the Triad leader got close enough, he pushed the button that would be the catalyst to his victims death. A loud echo could be heard throughout Liberty City. In the center of it all, stood a ruined car and its owner.

One down. The countdown had begun.

Next Day, Morning
It was Sunday moring. Detective Hanson sipped on his coffee, already awake. The man watched as the sunrise rose, its rays reflecting off the glass and scorching the side of his face. He was sitting in his dinning room watching early morning programs. The news was just about to start.

"Last night, a car exploded in China town, killing three people and leaving a man injured, police have not yet identified the victims."

"The crime rate continues to rise to enormous heights.." The news anchor continued.

"Just once I'd like a day when a murder doesn't happen in this d**ned wasteland of a city" the Gang Unit Police Officer grummbled unhappily. He was looking forward to his day off.. but it looks like he had to throw his plans out the window; yet again.

Afternoon

Due to the recent events, low moral gripped the chinese mafia like cold grasping talons. All the Triad leaders of the Liberty City had come to discuss the assassination of their boss.

"It's got to be the Leones, who else has a grudge against us?" one shouted rather dramatically. Whispers broke out amongst the crowd.

Xin Ming had been second in command and a loyal member of the Triads since its establishment in 1998, atleast, outwardly. Underneath this carefully constructed mask, lurked a treasonous and conniving snake who suduced others, but, it was quite ironic that he had been seduced by the power of the US government. He had been waiting for the moment when he could seize leadership of the chinese mafia.

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