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The Ebon Blade

Hunter

PostPosted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:06 pm


Greetings and bienvenue citizens! It is I, the infamous Black Cat, more well-known as The Ebon Blade, also known as Water Rouge, also known as something else. I have had a nice....month-long dream of pursuing a life of literature. What does that mean exactly? Well two (or three) paths if I stick to the art of literacy.

1. Become a full-time author, writing books, journals, and even hopefully, plays! (I do love the theater so.)

2. Become an English Teacher (perhaps even a professor) and write short stories on the side.

3. Skip the whole thing and become a video graphic designer! Woot woot!

So what does this mean for the thread and the guild it's in? Well I have planned out a series of books dealing with themes located here in E.R. An adventure filled with sorrow, hope, and life lessons (*gag*). Since it is you-all that I am basing these books off of, I thought you all deserved to see them in progress!

This thread will become big as I have already written much and I would appreciate it if you would refrain from posting in here. If you guys want to talk about it so much someone can make another thread for it but this is just for me thanks. Without further delay, let the typing begin!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:15 pm


~Table of Contents~

1. Intro To Thread

2. Table of Contents (You are Here)

3. Extra Info (News/Comments)

4. Prologue to Series

5. Book One Chapter Lay-Out

6. Book One Characters

7. Book One Chpt. 1 Start

The Ebon Blade

Hunter


The Ebon Blade

Hunter

PostPosted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:30 pm


Extra Info!!


News & Announcements

March 17th
-Thread is Opened!
-Prologue is posted!
-First Book Layout Posted!


Editors!
[[Editors are allowed to post remarks within the posts to help make my writing better and improve the final product. This includes their opinions (good/bad) of themes along with grammar corrections.]]
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:30 pm


Prologue


The following is a prologue I have made which is a small introduction to each book. By the end of the third book, if not the second, everything in this short story should make sense. That's my plan at least. Keep in mind that you may comment on anything I have written in a private message to me but only editors may directly say anything on my posts in this page.


[[Prologue: Shadows of Peace]]


"Peace. This world doesn't deserve such pleasantries. Greed, lust, hate, death; the wretched humans already have those things. So what is it they need? I'll tell you, my brothers: pain.

I remember how meek and humble they were, coming to us with their promises, their dreams, and their desire to do good. We were fools to believe them and grand them powers. What have we gotten back in return? Nothing. Not a soul has repaid their debt.

Now here we stand, shackled to the world we made and gave away so easily. They cannot possibly understand what they've done to us, but they will. These vermin will learn not to betray us. We will get our freedom.

Long has it been since we ruled this world and overdue our time has become. Numerous days have passed by where humans haven't felt remorse or shame for their sins and traitorous ways. Know this brothers, the mortals will be purged from our home. We will receive what is rightfully ours. Prepare yourselves my kin, the reckoning is at hand!"


A thunderous echo of rapid stomping and shots of agreement and hatred filled the dark chamber. Although the small embers in the center revealed little, any spectators would have been able to make out a few shadowy figures with bright glowing red eyes. The sound was awkward though as it was much too intense for so little a number, the roar of a stampede accompanying less than twenty men. It also seemed to carry-on for more than an hour when one would have suspected it to last but a few minutes. The reason was because much more than cheers emerged in the stone hall.

In response to the uproar, the red flicker of light had steadily grown into golden pillar of flames that pressed hard against the ceiling, and had done so without timber or oil to fuel it. Despite having developed into much more than any bonfire could compare to, the tongues of fire seemed to remain within a designated circle, never overstepping an invisible boundary. Even something of its magnitude didn't seem to manage lighting the entire chasm, as shadows still controlled most of the now scorching hot cave. It did reveal a horrific enough scene though, showing the true nature of the men who were still screaming.

The once normal looking, besides their black cloaks and unnatural eyes, men had morphed into creatures with nightmarish features. Their pale peach skin grew rough and as black as pure twilight, their average ten-toed feet hardened and combined together to form ragged hooves, and their fingers elongated and sharpened into deadly claws. Many of them sprouted black wings and bloody horns and began to grow in size, higher than any human should be. Their average bodies now the size and as well-built as any person might imagine a titan to be, barely lower than the ceiling. Much of their figures were covered in crimson runes which would glow intensely when their host would shout in rage.

The most savage and traumatizing part of the transformation was how dramatically their eyes had changed. Their eyes dulled in vibrancy from red to a sickly green, and had a look about them that would make a grizzly cower in fear. The recently docile humans had become rage-filled, desperate, and utterly violent demons which were only spoke-of in the stories of priests. All of them would have put a psychotic serial killer into a life of repentance if he thought they would be waiting for him in the afterlife. All of them, except one.

One man retained his form, which was covered in a black, slightly torn, robe which muffled his features. He was now standing in front of the blazing fire, overlooking the congregation of devils who's appearance or behavior didn't seem to phase. Even the column of nature's fury seemed like a tame campfire compared to this man's power, which seeped from every angle of his person.

By the time his right hand was lifted in the air and rested back at his waist, the entire hall went silent, petrified by his command. Even the echo of rage his companions had just made for the past hour dissipated into the shadows.

"Soon my brothers, soon we will rise once more. All they have left now...is time."



~*vv Editing Remarks vv*~

The Ebon Blade

Hunter


The Ebon Blade

Hunter

PostPosted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:42 pm


Book One Chapter Overview


First I guess I should go into more detail as what I'm thinking for the series in general. There's going to be four (perhaps five) "chosen ones" that will be the most powerful of their elements, though naturally, through rigorous training, or by magical artifact I cannot reveal yet. It's mostly personal interpretation anyway. They'll all be within the ages of 14-19 though just because that's where I am and most of the general audience is!

Anyway, these four, plus with the help of others (teamwork woopidy doo) will defeat the obvious evils you've seen in prologue and life will be oh-so joyous once more. (Sarcasm? Only I know!) They layout is gonna be like this though:
Book 1: Water
Book 2: Fire
Book 3: Wind
Book 4: Earth
Book 5: Final

There's a specific element I have planned for the fifth book but I'm going to keep it a surprise as well. I have to give you guys something to read don't I? So as you can see the first book is about water and yes my character is the star. Euan babeh! That's right "I-Win!" (If you don't get the joke, Euan is pronounced "you-wan").

The following is general plot summary of each of the chapters I have planned for the first book, aka Water.

Titles? (Open to suggestion)

-Requiem of Water*
-Water (Plain)

Index:
Chapter#
Chapter Name
Chapter Summary

1
Simple Life
Pirates enter the port. Conversation of the current state of the water nation. Shifts to Euan Tallis who is stuck in a boring and unchallenging class. Description of his life through 2nd person view. but story is always focused on what Euan knows/sees. Parents send him off on an errand after he gets home from school. He runs into pirates and eventually arrives at doctor's office.


2
Doctor / Dr. __________ (Thinking of a Name)
Description of doctor and his mysterious appearance, Euan is already good friends with him, which is evident in his familiarity with the doctor's practices (Euan is a very good medical assistant). They eventually start training where Euan practices healing things with his ability to control water. Day passes along and Euan leaves but runs into pirates again. Pirates enter the doc's office, Euan spies. Pirates talk of corruption government and doctor talks of how Euan isn't ready yet. Euan eventually leaves, realizing the time.


3
Door Is Opened
Euan goes back to the doctors for more training the next day but he is gone. Euan begins to practice w/o him but gets caught by father who doesn't support water manipulation (says its for worthless rats). Parents who are upper-class scholars (hens Euan's intelligence) put him under house arrest. He eventually runs for but is "captured" by the pirates. Brought to a secret room in a local tavern where he meets and talks with the doctor. Euan eventually agrees to travel with the pirates, says good-bye to doctor. They leave before parents realize Euan is gone.


4
The Pirate's Life for Me
Euan wakes up on pirate's ship, remembering last night. After talking with the crew (who aren't happy to have him), he is placed as the ship's new doctor (gets his own cabin) and is secluded. Plans are made to reach an island that is said to contain magical treasure. Euan is eventually trained in how to fight with an ax by the first mate. Two days later they reach the island which is very ominous. All of the pirates who are water manipulators cant figure out why their powers wont work so they send a fast scout and wait for his return. (They steer the ship and attack with water along with axes, guns, swords, and strong muscles).


5
-Still Thinking of a Name-
Scout doesn't return, most of crew goes to explore, including the captain and Euan. Eventually find a giant cave after a slightly harsh trek through a dense jungle, and find a giant sea goliath (a rare titan) sleeping in it. Scout has been capture and reveals all of the goliath's treasure and the magic ring he is wearing. The ring nullifies all elemental powers except the wearer's. Monster wakes up when they try to take it, and there's a slightly epic battle. Euan is the one to find the goliath's weakness and the captain finishes it.


6
On the Waves Again
Euan receives the ring as reward but doesn't get a share of the other treasure. Captain warns Euan to never wear it unless its an emergency, Euan locks it away in his cabin. (Ring's power only activates when it is worn.) Crew sets off for another port town where they refuel on food and medical supplies. Euan heals any injured in goliath fight and is earned the respect of the crew, now having a meaning instead of deadweight. The captain takes over training Euan in combat. The ship eventually reaches the port town.


7
-Name of Port Town-
Port town is full of drunks and partying (Tortuga ya!) but is also known for being the biggest crime hub in the western seas. (Refer to ER map). Separated from the crew, Euan gets captured by black-robed men who question him about things he doesn't understand and accuse him of being the "chosen of the water." Eventually the pirates rescue him and are forced to explain the situation as best they can to Euan. Shocked, the pirates finish restocking and set out again.


8
Path To Glory
Understanding why is important, Euan dedicates his time to training in battle, mostly in water manipulation, not in weapons like most of his pirate companions. Sensing the danger, captain directs the crew north where Euan can be protected from harm in the territory of light. When they reach the cold waters in the Ice Kingdom, they see black ships coming at them in the distance. Some are sent to get help from the Ice Elementals.

9
The Storm
Once the ships get closer, captain identifies them as enemies but also as electricity elementals. Lightning attack is launched, Euan puts on ring in a last-ditch effort to stop it. Surprised, captain tells Euan to keep it on and the pirates begin using their cannons to take out some of the ships. One out of three enemy ships sink and now at loss of powers, the enemy ships must draw in closer. Eventually the enemy ships collide with the pirate ship and there's a major fight on the pirate ship. Euan's crew generally has upperhand because its pure physical combat (thanks to ring) and their much stronger but battle changes when the enemy leader hurts Euan's captain and their forced to retreat into the ship.

10
Pirates try to plan different escapes but all are futile. Euan is unable to heal captain. Crew eventually decides to try and drown everyone but keep Euan safe. Euan takes off the ring but everything gets cold. The only pirate defenses get flung open and its revealed that the ice mistress has come to save the entire crew except those that have fallen in death.

At the ice palace, Euan to the captain who explains Euan's true heritage (He's the true heir to the Water Nation's throne and is the captain's son. Euan takes over as captain of the crew when captain dies from battle wounds. Euan makes plans to return back to the water nation and take the throne, which belongs to him. (The Ice Mistress agrees to accompany him as proof and as a sign of an allegiance between the two elements.)

End of Book One



~*vv Editing Remarks vv*~
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:14 am


Book One: Characters!


Now I'm sure you'd want a nice full list of all the important characters and such. It's why you're even looking at this post isn't it? Well too bad suckas! I'll post the characters once the first chapter is done. =)

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Hunter

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