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 Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:21 pm
Thanks to some inspiration from yuna-chan, this forum is dedicated to her for sharing her thoughts on a new sub-forum..
She has always been a great person who tries very hard to remain active in the guild, she has ALWAYS contributed in the events and ALWAYS blows us away in everything. She has amazing poetic talent and major skills.
Like the quote in the homepage: she is unique and she is a writer whom inspires everyone.
Therefore, you may use this forum to post up your poems/writing for personal feedback comments from everyone else in the guild.
Thanks Miss Yuna!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:40 pm
aww *turns pink* >~< thank you for those kind words Lacus-san ^^
I guess I'll start off with a couple writing pieces then ^^
Oh, and please visit my gaian journal and give me as many comments as you'd like about my writing pieces. ^^
Positive and/or negatives are both good ^^
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:42 pm
My World is Just a Dream (A short story ^^)
As the sun rises on the horizon, the moon shyly slips away under the cover of dark blue sapphire clouds. The cool sherbet rays of hope light up the sky for a brand new day. The leaves of deep emerald green sway gently on their brown tanned bodies as the wind sings to it's rhythm, and the blades of fresh, yellow-green grass that flourishes the land; sway their little arms along with the tune of the wind's gentle and graceful voice.
Nocturnal creatures gently retire to their homes hidden in the shadows of the dawn, as the creatures of the daylight awaken to the smell of morning. Now fully risen, the bright blazing sun shines proudly across the land, as vividly colored flowers fill the air with their sweet scents. White, fluffy clouds fly gracefully in the sky as they smile to see their reflections in the clear, shiny, mirror-like water; that flows gently in the wide, vast oceans of the world.
Everything is so beautiful, and calm. So relaxing. . . But soon, this whole world evaporates, and I awaken into the world of realities. My world is just a dream that will never come true as long as the dark, horrible world of reality still exists, still conquering our minds, and still consuming our imagination.
-By: Yuna-chan heart
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:46 pm
~Who I Am~
When the sun has risen,
And time runs strong.
I wonder...
When the sun has fallen,
And the moon has been lifted.
When the waters have calmed,
And time has frozen.
I wonder...
Every second, minute, and day
Of my life I wonder,
Who am I?
Am I a lost bewildered blossom that has fallen from an old whithered tree?
Or a plant sprouting out of the soil?
Am I a wanderer traveling the world in search of wonders?
Or am I just a loner looking for my place in the world?
Am I a fragment from a sweet dream?
Or a dark silhouette shadow from a nightmare?
Am I a ghost from the past?
Or a prediction of the future?
Am I a dreamer or a wisher?
A writer or a thinker?
A hero or a fantasy?
An angel or a demon?
An artist or a painter?
A friend?
A traitor?
A consumer?
Or am I a giver?
With so many thoughts running through my head,
I don't even know if I'm any one of these thoughts.
But there's one thing I know for sure.
I am me.
My own unique self. =]
-By: Yuna-chan heart
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:41 pm
In your first poem there is a lot of illustration in your word choice, its very imaginable and colorful! it was very very imaging when i read it.
In your second one, i think it wasn't as strong as your first, but it was still awsome, your word choices of describing things are wonderful! i wish i were more aspiring as u are when u write poems, its a very strong skill u have ~^^~
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 4:24 pm
Thank you Lacus-san ^^
~Yuna~
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:17 pm
This is my latest poem, please feel free to comment and give feedback! ^_^
~Yuna~
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:18 pm
The Person In My Heart ^_^
His dark brown hair sways gently in the cool summer breeze, as his mysterious, beautiful eyes suck me into his heart. Every time he smiles, my heart skips a beat, as it shines against the sunset. His skin is warm against mine, and his love fills my soul. My thoughts are always occupied by him. He turns my gray skies blue, and when it rains inside me, he makes the sun shine bright. He is the one who completes me; my knight in shining armor, my samurai. My Prince Charming. He is the one I love. He is my hero.
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Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 10:12 pm
Yuna-chan2006211 The Person In My Heart ^_^ His dark brown hair sways gently in the cool summer breeze, as his mysterious, beautiful eyes suck me into his heart. Every time he smiles, my heart skips a beat, as it shines against the sunset. His skin is warm against mine, and his love fills my soul. My thoughts are always occupied by him. He turns my gray skies blue, and when it rains inside me, he makes the sun shine bright. He is the one who completes me; my knight in shining armor, my samurai. My Prince Charming. He is the one I love. He is my hero. Your word choice is so wonderful and descriptive! i love words that give me visual appearance while i am reading them and you display it wonderfully in this! and its absolutely enchanting+beautiful! As always, i love it! heart
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 2:46 pm
Thank you Lacus-san ^^
~Yuna~
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:06 am
Yes I am active lyke always!! biggrin
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