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 Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:55 pm
now this one i wrote on my favorite mythical creature (i say they exist but thats what i think) the dragon, enjoy
Dragon
one so proud and wise
people go to for advice
with scales that shine in the sun
the advice they share is so much fun
they soar in the sky
from here to there they do fly
anger they must not feel
or your fate is sealed
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:57 pm
hmmm. Well im not good at writing poetry nor do i read it much but i must say it was pretty average. The fourth line seemed out of place so that really messed me up but other than that it all rhymed well.
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rolejunkie42 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:45 am
the fourth line i got from a book i once read that dragons are very wise and and if they help you with something usually would be in a beat around the bush way cant really explain it but ill find that book again
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 2:54 am
It's nice, but i have to agree that the fourth line is kind of wierd. Which was the book you read it in? (I cant believe there is a book that has to do with drogons and i havent read it eek )
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:38 am
The fourth lines means to something like this:
A dragon will never give you straight forward advice. Rather than give a person advice which will help them reach their goal faster, a dragon will give them as little information as possible. This is because dragons are believe to have grown to become thousands of years old. The less information that the give you, the more fun it becomes as they watch you run around like a chicken with its head cut off.
Dragons are, by nature, tricksters to no end. Because many of their attitudes, they are believed to be the protectors of Balance, and thus rather than get too involved, they guide with riddles or puzzles and watch from the side lines smile Hope this helps clear up any confusions.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:22 am
right on the dot i couldnt find that book though i have looked hard.
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rolejunkie42 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 1:28 pm
i didn't mean it like that. Its just you talk about all of that in the first two lines then you go on to something else in the third. Go back to it in the fourth, then go back to something new in the fifth. It just didn't read right.
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Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:54 am
I can say from experience that this is truly how the mind of this particular writer works. One moment, she is writing something and then "Oh! I just remembered something else!" and then she goes back to writing the original stuff, and it repeats over and over.
She is very easily distracted =P I think it's funny hehe. She writes good stuff though.
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rolejunkie42 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:43 pm
that explains it. I've got some friends who are the exact same way.
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