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OG LoLo

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:22 pm


Kira-fightingdreamer
Submitted this to the poetry contest too. This one actually won third place, for some reason. Ahaha, my teacher is talking to the student in charge of yearbook literary section to see if they will put it in the yearbook for me.

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Zipping down my jacket, I sigh.
Yielding it to the ground, my body tenses.
X shaped scars criss-cross up and down my arms
Warriors only reminder of once glory filled days.
Visions fill my head, predictions of tomorrow.
Unless I succeed, each one proffers only disaster.
Time passes quickly, playing along with the beat of my frantic heart
Silence engulfs my ears, leaving me alone with my thoughts.
Remembering days of peace; it’s something I can’t do anymore.
Quietly I slip into a battle ready pose
Painting a picture in my mind, imagined enemies are everywhere
Only I can win; only me.
Night sky is fading.
Mankind sleeps, waiting.
Last one standing I will be, after old
Kinsmen of mine dare stand before me.
Joker, oh, I wish I was.
Inside my mind, a
Hero I am not. But a
Glamorous façade, I will act out once more.
Final testament.
Energy boils through my veins.
Dawn has come at last.
Calling of my fate.
Bitter resentment fills my heart now.
Apocalypse is here.


Wow, that was a good word-play poem w/ the alphabets. Nicely done. 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:23 pm


OG LoLO:: Thank you! You have a brillant imagination too! Maybe you could try writing a piece like this? ..........oops. I still have to PM you. *totally forgot* LOL anyway, the only concept behind this to go in order of the alphabet, from either A to Z or Z to A.

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OG LoLo

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:06 pm


Yea, was thinking about it... but w/ the holidays brain is on vacation somehow lol XD. Mayb after the festivity I'll b able to focus on that idea more.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:48 pm


But here's a previous piece I've done on a whim that is never seen til now. If u're familiar w/ palindromes - then its pretty self-explanatory... It's my only poem done this way, so I'm proud of it. Enjoy. N Happy New Year!!! 4laugh


Rainbow Over Clouds

Rainbow
A multi-color of lights
Vibrantly painted, decorated brightly
Reflecting water shone richly
Dew uplifting the following spirits
Purity transpired
Spectrums designed in skies opening
Wonderfully embracing
Soft, gentle
~*~Clouds~*~
Gentle, soft
Embracing wonderfully
Opening skies in designed spectrums
Transpired purity
Spirits following the uplifting dew
Richly shone water reflecting
Brightly decorated, painted vibrantly
Lights of multi-color a
Rainbow



*Perhaps u might like to try writing one of this type of poetry sometime also, Kira or any1 reading here. Its quite tricky, but fun to do... I may go n work on another palindrome poem if/when I'm really bored later, lol.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:46 pm


It took me a couple of days, but I finally got it. Behold: Twilight Zone A-Z


Twilight Zone A-Z

As I lay here thinking...
Before the details are drawn, do not attempt to adjust your senses
Captivating your mind, I will try my best
Did it grab your attention yet?
Envision a world of non-existence, even though the spirit is alive
Free will lacks substance when paralysis sets in
Go forth a movement that can't be perform
Hindered from scratch, be glad you're not me
Identity crisis wanders into thoughts of mine
Just me, alone I feel
Kismet chance fade as time fly by
Loneliness fill the depth of the ocean
Mobility impaired is a great burden to bear
None can tell, what I've seen
Outsiders see an image masked, perceive to be true
Profiling from afar reveals nothing of the soul
Questions are many, but answers are scarce
Reality is a trash compactor for the broken dreams
Stigmatize by others; I struggle to belong
Tribulation lingers along as the journey continue
Unknowing how the universe works, bring future uncertainties
Variables derive without solutions
Why, must it be this way?
X marks the spot to my beating heart
You'll never know
Zero autonomy like I do


*If u (Kira or any1) got any comments, critiques, suggestions for me about - this poem, the 1 above, or any oth poems I've posted - pls post here... thx
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:12 pm


Hey OG LoLo. I'm short on time to really sit down and edit your poetry, but I wanted to let you know I FINALLY got to read both of them and boy oh boy, you seem to have a knack for it.

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