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 Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 1:54 am
((Hey torment its Rasarai. You told me to open a thread here and we would spar...well you would spar with me if you wanted to lol anyway I'll start one up. But I doubt I will finish the battle tonight and I will probably only have one post here for the moment.))
Feeling the wind blow in from the ocean to the east Rasarai stands in an open field of unkept grass. Rasarai turns in the direction of the wind and sees that it is morning because the darkness flees before the appearance of the sun. The field is situated between a mountain range to the west and an ocean to the east. Looking south Rasarai sees a forest that seems to stretch into infinity, a forest that he once played in when he was a child. Looking North he sees the field stretch for another 10 kilometres before hitting another forest, a forest that shelters the path out of this field. The field itself is around 20 kilometres long and 20 kilometres wide, almost like a square. Within the field there are small hills that look like sand dunes constructed out of grass. But these hills are nowhere near the beach just near the mountains and the forests surrounding Rasarai.
Seating himself down Rasarai turns to his right and near the beach he sees a burnt out house that has decayed over the years. Feeling his heart knot inside he remembers that this small house once belonged to his family...before the massacre. Standing himself up he silently walks towards the house and sees the remnants of a field being worked, broken shovels and plows litter the ground many of them are claimed by the rust brought on by the ocean breezes.
"This farm was pretty crappy...didnt grow much...I mean how do you grow something near an ocean...we may have been poor but at least we were happy..."muttered Rasarai as he looked once again at the forest to the south. Feeling a tad nervous Rasarai begins to do routine stretches to make sure he is not injured in the upcoming battle, even though the upcoming battle is only a sparring match he still doesn't want to hurt himself due to his lack of preparation.
((hopefully this is good for you. Well i'll just wait it out reply to this anytime...or whatever. I'll reply as soon as I can if you reply.))
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:19 am
((Hmm....well, at least you have a fair grasp of descriptions. No need to help there, at least in the terms of surroundings. I would mention that you should be well aware of your surroundings at all times in a fight. A had a spar with Trei Shouri before and he had forgotten he included rain in the setting. Torment was invisible. Invisibility does not stop rain, and as such there was a hole where Torment was. Trei did not notice this until it was almost too late.))
((Also, there did seem to be a few fumbles in your grammar, or at least awkwardness in word choice. Part of a good fight is not only good tactics, but good grammar. Overall, the introduction was splendid. ^_^ Now for my post...))
((Hmm...Lesse...which character to use...Mindblaze, Bioblaze, Torment, Shar`Addan, [???], Craven, a fully magical Tac, and Kane might be a bit too...advanced, especially for your character. Hmm...Atlas, Kirby, or a less magical Tac.))
((K, so says Teh Uberliv, and Kirby it shall be.))
The clomp of military issue combat boots laying down grass below heavy strides along with the jangle of shell casings, keys, and other small metallic objects could be heard approaching out from the east, a small navy vessel abandoned on the otherwise pristine shores. The man approaching was a killer, an assault rifle strapped to his back with grenades, sidearms, knives, and ammo hanging and strapped about his person. Slung at his side and kept close, almost protectively, was a blue crowbar stained with dried blood, the man's only friend who could stand him, and even then it was a stretch, Bluey.
He stopped about 10 feet away, folding his massive arms before him as his eyes fell over the other combatant, flitting around the territory intermittently. There was a fire in his eyes, a blaze fueled by the Torment of others, a nickname he had garnered in the war. He didn't just kill the enemy, he tortured them until he released them to the sweet escape of death. All of which, admittedly, were easier in urban combat settings. Open plains were....open.
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 3:53 pm
((alright thanx for the advice. I'll will try harder with my grammer next time. Just to tell you that I will be only posting twice here because I have work in an hour. Is that ok? Like can we leave it as a prolonged battle? Well just tell me in your next post.))
His senses tingled at the approach of this newcomer and Rasarai looked up to see who it is. He didn't need his chi to sense this guy, Rasarai heard the roar of the vessel that landed on the beach to the east. Watching the unknown soldier approach Rasarai concentrated hard and summoned his chi of flame into existance.
Watching the man approach Rasarai...felt....the mans rage blazing. Looking closer he saw that this man was itching for a fight for his eyes blazed an unnatural rage. Lifting his mailed gloves in the style of a boxer Rasarai assumed a defensive stance. All the while his chi blazed like a small candle with a bottle of propane gas next to it, in a sense ready to explode if needed.
Looking directly at the newcomer Rasarai commented, "I thought you would be coming through the forest to the south...but that doesn't matter now." Still assuming the same stance Rasarai introduced himself, "I am Lord Rasarai, knight of the Goddess Lady Rasarai. I am here only to visit my home...and to see if any of those bastards that killed my family were still around. Now tell me...who are you." Rasarai matched the newcomers stare with a fiery stare of his own.
((I know my character aint too advanced...i will upgrade it sooner or later but at the moment he will suffice. This will be my second last post. hopefully you post in the next 15 mins if not this will be my last post until later sorry.))
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:02 pm
((I can't make an IC reply right now, but I will note that this can continue as long as you like, or until a victor is found. That Deadwolf1 guy is a serious a*****e. I'm on his ignored list AND banned from the guild he's calling you out in. I was trying to make a few comments and he went apeshit. What a ******** a*****e...))
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:33 pm
((I'll reply later since i can't go IC yet but I wouldn't worry too much. You are going to get in as my judge as you planned it in the PM. Look Torment you are a whole lot better than me and you sure as hell are better than Deadwolf1. I have seen your battles and I have seen his and all i can say is...I know who the victor will be. Look don't worry, i don't really care if I lose against him as long as I fight and show him that I aint a coward simple as that. I will IC a bit later on...in about 2 hours time or so.))
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:20 pm
Lord Rasarai ((alright thanx for the advice. I'll will try harder with my grammer next time. Just to tell you that I will be only posting twice here because I have work in an hour. Is that ok? Like can we leave it as a prolonged battle? Well just tell me in your next post.))
His senses tingled at the approach of this newcomer and Rasarai looked up to see who it is. He didn't need his chi to sense this guy, Rasarai heard the roar of the vessel that landed on the beach to the east. Watching the unknown soldier approach Rasarai concentrated hard and summoned his chi of flame into existance.
Watching the man approach Rasarai...felt....the mans rage blazing. Looking closer he saw that this man was itching for a fight for his eyes blazed an unnatural rage. Lifting his mailed gloves in the style of a boxer Rasarai assumed a defensive stance. All the while his chi blazed like a small candle with a bottle of propane gas next to it, in a sense ready to explode if needed.
Looking directly at the newcomer Rasarai commented, "I thought you would be coming through the forest to the south...but that doesn't matter now." Still assuming the same stance Rasarai introduced himself, "I am Lord Rasarai, knight of the Goddess Lady Rasarai. I am here only to visit my home...and to see if any of those bastards that killed my family were still around. Now tell me...who are you." Rasarai matched the newcomers stare with a fiery stare of his own.
((I know my character aint too advanced...i will upgrade it sooner or later but at the moment he will suffice. This will be my second last post. hopefully you post in the next 15 mins if not this will be my last post until later sorry.)) Kirby glared at the smaller man, "You can call me Torment, pretty boy. I hope you brought some lube." He didn't say anything else as he darted forward, turned to one side, one hand slipping a 9mm from its holster at his side, hidden by the sheer mass of the man, the other hand tearing Bluey from the weak loop that held it, swining the clawed end at this knight. The crowbar was obviously a fakeout, the deadly bit came from the two rounds that would be fired from the 9mm.
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:48 pm
Quote: Kirby glared at the smaller man, "You can call me Torment, pretty boy. I hope you brought some lube." He didn't say anything else as he darted forward, turned to one side, one hand slipping a 9mm from its holster at his side, hidden by the sheer mass of the man, the other hand tearing Bluey from the weak loop that held it, swining the clawed end at this knight. The crowbar was obviously a fakeout, the deadly bit came from the two rounds that would be fired from the 9mm. Quite stunned by the mans rudeness Rasarai barely had time to register he was about to attack. Charging forward and bringing his chi to life he raised his mailed glove to block the crowbar. Feeling to powerful hits deflect of his armor Rasarai quickly studied his opponent to see he had fired 2 rounds at him. Grunting in anger Rasarai used the hand that blocked the crowbar and ignited it with flame. Before any reaction can be registered Rasarai pushed his flaming forward until it was centimeters from his opponents face. Grinning insanely Rasarai said, "I aint gay." Opening his hand he unleashed a super hot flaming chi blast in his opponents face. Since it was so close it would be impossible to dodge but the flame isn't hot enough to kill them him only hot enough to burn all the hairs off his face and head.
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 12:58 am
Having little hair on his head anyway not much was accomplished, but may the powers below eat him if that didn't hurt like the dickens. He grunted and pulled back, dropping the 9mm and slipping a flashbang grenade from the belt of 'nades he carried. As he backed away he pressed a button on the cylindrical grenade and dropped it, quickly turning his back and starting into a full out run in the direction of the forest. As soon as the 'nade came in contact with anything it would go off. A cheap use, merely to stun and create a distraction to get away. Perhaps close quarters combat wasn't a good idea.
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 5:55 am
Laughing to himself Rasarai became a tad too confident, because of that he did not see the flash grenade appear...and he was not prepared for the flash attack. Feeling the light piercing his eyes Rasarai screams out in annoyance and jumps back. Totally blinded Rasarai uses his sixth sense to sense out his opponent and realized that he too had backed off and he wasn't affected by the flash grenade. Grunting in annoyance Rasarai focused his senses and formed a proper defensive stance, for Rasarai was certain the military man would try to take advantage of the situation.
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 1:14 pm
Once the grenade went off Kirby paused for only a moment, pulling three grenades from his belt, leaving only eight. He kept in a slight backwards run, chucking the grenades at Rasarai, the three being a frag grenade, a smoke grenade, and a vessel for a chemical substance that acts similarly to spieder's silk, a Web Grenade. The last would create a sticky mass that hardens quickly and that if ignited explodes. Kirby then kept running, and would keep on going. 10k was nothing, plus, a forest offered better tactical advantages.
((He's not going to stop you know...he might fire off some rounds, but he's not going to stop. He's gone much further with much more weight for training. Unless you have a way to catch and stop him, you can 'fast forward' to the forest.))
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:28 pm
Still within the depths of his sixth sense he noticed that his opponent was doing a throwing motion and he did this three times. Not being able to sense the type of grenade thrown Rasarai crossed his armored arms over his face and jumped to his right. The first grenade exploded and the fragrance of smoke tickled his nose as he remained in his cross armed position. The next grenade exploded and he felt something sticky cover him completely. Using his flame he burnt this away completely but his left him completely open for the third grenade.
Once the third grenade exploded it reacted with his flaming chi and everything around him exploded. Usually such an explosion would harm a human but only a fool would think that flame and explosions would harm the knight of flame. The effects of the flash had worn off and he found himself surrounded by a flaming field. Smiling softly he let the flames lick at his body, letting it feed him new energy to power up his chi. Little did he notice was that since there was so much force in the grenades his armor took some damage. Looking down on his armor he realized that his titanium casing had begun to melt and some parts have been cracked. Grunting in annoyance he starts to look for the military man. Looking around he notices the military man running towards the forest. I have to conserve energy thought Rasarai as he rejected the idea of using his hyper speed to catch him. Running after him in his normal speed Rasarai entered the forest. Upon entering the forest Rasarai unleashed his flame aura and assumed a defensive stance, prepared to counter anything.
((Aight done sorry about that. Thanx for that ^^))
((Edited hey torment can i ask you something? How do you grab someone and not godmod? Like:
Rasarai grabbed torment and encased him in a bearhug
Is that godmodding? Just curious))
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:43 am
((Edit acknowledged and posts deleted.))
((Simply add words like 'attempt' and 'try.' Also possibly including phrases such as emboldened below))
Torment attempted to grab Rasarai by the nose. Should he sucesseed, he'd make a foolish attempt to make it seem like he's stolen it. If not, he'd forget all this foolishness.
~~Real Post~~
((This is going to be crappy...I've been unable to sleep all night due to a problem a friend is having, which I am not even fully sure of what it is yet. *le sigh* I worry too much...))
The crack of a twig ahead signaled Kirby was close by, but where exactly was a different matter. Kirby had pulled ahead only far enough to set a few...special traps, set for prox detonation, each one a flashbang. From Rasarai's left a sidearm began firing off rounds, lodged in a tree but made to look as if someone were firing it, the trigger linked to Kirby's finger by a line of fishing wire. From much further away Kirby was lining up a shot with use of the scope on his FN Minimi, trying to pick out a weakness near the neck or face.
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:27 pm
((alright thanx for clearing that up. I have seen some people doing this.
Grabs your neck before getting hit
I was thinking that falls under Godmodding or something, but your explanation helped alot. Also good luck with your friend, hopefully it works out for you guys. ^^))
Using his sixth sense Rasarai detected that the military man was close by, feeling the chi emanating from his opponent he felt that the mans arms were cocked in the sort of position that a gunman would take when taking aim. In this usual circumstance the knight of flame would throw a fireball at his opponent but something in his gut told him that he might be doing him a favour should he try and attack.
Feeling bullets richochet off his armor on the left Rasarai looked down that dents have started to appear on his armor. "Damn it! if it wasn't for those grenades!" roared Rasarai as he attempted to cover his head with his armored arms. Jumping back a few feet Rasarai turned and ran out of the forest out of his enemies line of fire.
Turning sharply around Rasarai unleashed his flame chi to its maximum level. He wants to play dirty then lets play dirty. Summoning a nova intensity fireball Rasarai threw it in the direction he came in. The nova intensity fireball is so hot that by merely passing something flammable it could set it alight. The fireball blazed towards the forest setting the grass underneath it on fire. As soon as the fireball entered the forest the results were disasterous. The trees near the field spontaneously burst into flame as the fireball roared past. Feeling the fireball enter the forest Rasarai waited til the fireball was deeper into the forest. Trees and deadwood caught on flame as the fireball blazed in the forest burning everything in its path. As soon as the fireball reached sufficient distance Rasarai focused his chi and forced the fireball to explode. The explosion of the fireball was monstrous and it had the same explosive power as a C4 bomb and the flames were as hot as superheated napalm.
Seeing the forest begin to burn Rasarai smiled and assumed a defensive stance. Knowing that eventually the opponent would run out Rasarai summoned his chi again and waited for his opponent to appear.
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