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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 8:04 pm


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Chapter 2 ( i will add chapter 1 but i lost it at the moments)


Here i am some where in Europe. my plane just crashed near a small village, my friends where just captured by a group of ppl, and now here i am hiding in a bush... can this get any more worse.

i followed the ppl hoping to see where they where taking my friends. they stopped at a small cabin with a mountain right behind it and a trail right to the left of the cabin leading to a lake. on the trail there was a dead body of a cop that had to of been from America, in his hand was a 9mm handgun which i picked up hoping to use it to save my friends. i sneaked up to the building and peeked into one of the windows where in the living room there was 4 guys and about 2 other guys in the dinning room where they had my friends Nate and Bryce tied up and knocked out in the corner of the dinning room. i creaped over to the door and opened it very slowly but 1 of the men say me and next thing i know 5 guys rushed towards me wielding axes and knifes. i didn't hesitate, i shoot each and everyone of them in the head and watched them fall to the floor. i ran over to my friends and untied them and woke them up. i walked towards the stairs that lead to the second floor that is when some one ran down the stairs right at me wielding a chainsaw. i thought as fast as i could and rolled out of the way just in time to avoid sertain death. i aimed the gun at the man and shoot but there was no ammo left he rushed towards my again. *BANG*. the man fell to the ground right in front of me dead on the floor and right behind him was me friend Bryce holding a shotgun in his hands.
"oh yeah s**t just got real!!" said Bryce smiling.
"where the hell did you get a shotgun?" i said
"what you mean you didn't notice the gun cabinet right next to the stairs" he said.
"sweat i call the other shotgun" called Nate as he ran to the gun cabinet.
"dame it you guys suck i want a shot gun all im stuck with is an empty handgun" i said sadly.
" hay look there is a s**t load of shotgun shells and handgun ammo in here also there is a 9mm in here and a ninja sword" said Nate.
"AWESOME!!! i call the 9mm and the sword" i yelled.
"hay no fair you will then have 2 9mm handguns while me and Nate only have a shotgun." said Bryce angrily.
"so you guys have shotguns so bite me besides i do my best work with 2 9mm's" i said.
"what do you mean best work?"said Nate and Bryce.
"wweell... im sorta a secret government guns man." i said.
" WHAT THE ********!!!! WHY DIDN"T YOU TELL US ABOUT THIS A LONG TIME A GO!!??" yelled Nate and Bryce.


TO BE CONTINUDED
 
PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 8:25 pm


also please comment on my story preview. thanks biggrin

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 11:28 pm


xd NB some grammer/spelling issues but overall good story. It's got potential I'd say. Keep it up. biggrin biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:32 am


thanks for telling me about the grammar. i fixed the grammar now cause i also noticed.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:45 am


ok lets think of something of the top of mu head....

lets start mid way


fred inpatiently strolled from side to side in the compact prison cell as he waited for night to fall, this cobwebbed covered monster mansion was enough to make the strongest of men cry ghouls haunted the hallways, where dust new no bounds and the spiders walked amoung them in the darkest of spots.
but it was no accident that fred wound up in this crazy hell bent fourtress, but all was not clear to him, his memory faded and his physical state in terrible condition, for the 2nd night in a row he would search this prison like a spider searchs for its prey waiting for one false move so that it can devour its prey.
fred was the fly but as confused as he was, a wonderland was in his mind.
as he entered the horror house 2 nights before, led astray by a spirit illusion,tricks wer eplayed on his young naive ming and hiss normal pesamystic(not spelt right dont no the correct spelling) attitude was destroyed, demolished destroyed and discindergrated, as it was replaced with an open minded optimystic young man. this may seem like a blessing but it was quite the opposite, these were just used to make sure that the easily worried fred found no reason to leave, instead he would stay in this monstrosity for a eternity............................ i will continue if i remember
PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:40 am


dude that part of you story is awesome must here more biggrin biggrin

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:13 pm


nice stories ppls XD
PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:24 pm


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also please comment on my story preview. thanks biggrin

Nice, Leader! u awsome! biggrin

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