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 Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:58 pm
I have two pics for you!
(pick which ever you'd like)
http://zombiekatt44.deviantart.com/art/Lupax-My-Nobody-104991984
Thank you! (oh, and don't forget to post your vote up up top!)
P.S. Please give me advice (but nothing nasty such as: you should just quit life, you have no future what so ever. I hate you).
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:32 am
you need to fix how big you draw your eyes or fix the jaw line because it looks like the facces dont really fit the face that they are on
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:58 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 7:15 pm
ugh i hate u. u suck. xd
lol im just kidding :]
some one did that to me before...yea no comment to them lol
well im gonna critique the mecha girl
her head looks a bit long and her hair looks kinda awkward. maybe work on showing some individual stands stands of hair or something. idk how to explain it T-T lol. eyes look a bit awkward but everyone gots there own style. i went thro a good 200000000 styles b4 i found mine. trust me, all the ppl on here know how cruddy my eyes looked wen i first go here lol. eye brows look a bit big but idk that ur call too. if u wanna fix them up tho, just like make them thinner and it should look good. plus, the neck looks a bit small and short too. Maybe make it longer and a bit wider and it should look good biggrin . next, for the sholders, they look right to me but wen you get to the arms, the look kinda long compared to the torse. [ i see youve been workin on that muscle lol mrgreen ] she looks a bit skinny but u should get another person's opinion on that. as uve seen i have a tendency for mayin ppl way to skinny
*phew* last thing lol. hands look a bit small but then again look at me. I DONT EVEN DRAW HANDS. lol XD
other then that it looks relli good
keep drawing and keep up the good work biggrin
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:16 pm
oxellebellxo ugh i hate u. u suck. xd lol im just kidding :] some one did that to me before...yea no comment to them lol well im gonna critique the mecha girl her head looks a bit long and her hair looks kinda awkward. maybe work on showing some individual stands stands of hair or something. idk how to explain it T-T lol. eyes look a bit awkward but everyone gots there own style. i went thro a good 200000000 styles b4 i found mine. trust me, all the ppl on here know how cruddy my eyes looked wen i first go here lol. eye brows look a bit big but idk that ur call too. if u wanna fix them up tho, just like make them thinner and it should look good. plus, the neck looks a bit small and short too. Maybe make it longer and a bit wider and it should look good biggrin . next, for the sholders, they look right to me but wen you get to the arms, the look kinda long compared to the torse. [ i see youve been workin on that muscle lol mrgreen ] she looks a bit skinny but u should get another person's opinion on that. as uve seen i have a tendency for mayin ppl way to skinny *phew* last thing lol. hands look a bit small but then again look at me. I DONT EVEN DRAW HANDS. lol XD other then that it looks relli good keep drawing and keep up the good work biggrin Thank you! And yes, I have been trying to develop my people's muscle tone. I have problems with art sad Oh well, practice makes perfect! Oh, and I hate you too xd JK.
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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:39 am
Try working on the anatomy. I find that I'm always watching the way people move during thed ay, I even take note of how their clothes crease. Pay attention to people more and eventually it'll show in your art. ^^
I think that's the first step you should take to improve you mad skills. After that, you should be experienced enough to know what to work on next.
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:13 pm
shiny dollar Try working on the anatomy. I find that I'm always watching the way people move during thed ay, I even take note of how their clothes crease. Pay attention to people more and eventually it'll show in your art. ^^ I think that's the first step you should take to improve you mad skills. After that, you should be experienced enough to know what to work on next. Thanks! That's really helpful! *smiles
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