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The_Brightest_Moon

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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:25 am

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I don't know why the image is slanted (if it appears that way- if it appears normal then ok but to me it comes out slanted xD), but on the hand holding the heart, please draw redlines to help correct it (havent really drawn in finger details so i need help drawing it in general).

Also could you help me on the shoulders and arms? It seems pretty proportional but the arms and shoulders are sooooo off! And if you see anything else please help me but I think in general it's good. Just a draft of a pic I'm doing for valentines day.

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:22 am

I rotated her so you have a better understanding of the anatomy changes I made
hope you don't freak out lol XD

~I think you did a nice job on the head and face, but the eye furthest from us looked a little phunky so I fixed it for you and did some forshortening on it
~ The body didn't seem to have a sense of gravity and thus making it look like she was about to fall (this would have been hard to pick out if you didn't rotate the picture) so I adjusted the body
~ The shoulders were just a smudge too wide
~I did the arms and hand I hope that works for you smile
~I would also suggest moving her eyes so she is looking at the heart in her hand. smile

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~I did some folds on the dress because you didn't seem to have any at all so here is a referance

You did a nice job in my mind though biggrin
Keep going at it c:

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The_Brightest_Moon

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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:56 am

gun_girl

I rotated her so you have a better understanding of the anatomy changes I made
hope you don't freak out lol XD

~I think you did a nice job on the head and face, but the eye furthest from us looked a little phunky so I fixed it for you and did some forshortening on it
~ The body didn't seem to have a sense of gravity and thus making it look like she was about to fall (this would have been hard to pick out if you didn't rotate the picture) so I adjusted the body
~ The shoulders were just a smudge too wide
~I did the arms and hand I hope that works for you smile
~I would also suggest moving her eyes so she is looking at the heart in her hand. smile

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~I did some folds on the dress because you didn't seem to have any at all so here is a referance

You did a nice job in my mind though biggrin
Keep going at it c:

thanks! It IS just a draft so I didn't really wanna get too into details of folds and stuff. I thought the body was pretty good xD (the sweatshirt was just really baggy and i guess it didnt fit her form). The boobs arent really supposed to be that big, but it gives me a good understanding of better placement and stuff XD thanks!

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