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PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:37 am


To be specific some of my poetry haha.Thought it was about time to share some of it with you all...that and you know...I had to find my notebook ^^;; anyways here's some of my poetry,I'll put when it was written next to it.

Untitled -written for jen in '04

As time slips by,
I'll lose myself forever,
In the beauty of your eyes,
As we hold each other close,
To feel that glorious warmth,
The snow will fall around us,
Gently landing upon the earth,
I'll whisper sweet words of love to you,
As we gently lock lips,
Feeling a bliss given by that pure soft kiss,
I'll gently touch your cheek,
And smiley softly,
Knowing we were destined to meet,
I'll hold you tight,
Letting you know I'll be here for you,
All day and all night.




Unseen - August '07
I see her in my mind the moment I close my eyes,

I yearn for her everytime a tear slides down from my eye,

I hold her hand even though it is not there,

I feel disassembled with out her here,

My heart breaks and breaks,

Acheing to indulge in just one kiss,

I die a little more with every shaky breath,

I wish to be with her through worst and best,

If only she could hear how loud my heart beats beneath my chest..




Stuck - '08

I long for your touch and yet it pains me to feel it,I wish to give you my heart and yet you do not take it,I love to talk to you and would if I could,morning noon and night,and yet you keep at a distance,cutting me off as just a friend,I force a smile and lie I'm fine,even though I'm dieing every time.


Untitled - '07

My chest it is acheing,

From all the crieing and sinking,

Sinking deep into nothing,

My heart colldieing with stone,

It's acheing and yearning,

With every breath I take ,

Every thought I think,

And for every step I take it seems I am brought further away,

The hours fly by as nothing is there to stop them,

I stare into the distance even though there is none,

I cry everytime I wake,

Every sob shakeing me as though it were an earthquake,

I shake and shake,

For these feeling I'm unable to break,

And so there is no escape,

From the hell I've seemed to create..





..and there is some of my poetry.I'd throw some haikus up but I can't find my notebook that contains them ^^; so until I find that notebook I wont have any of those posted but yea,lemme know whatcha think of my poetry.







PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:49 pm


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I like the first the bestest. :3

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 1:34 pm


Thanks! I'd love to be able to write more poetry like that,you know happy and everything,but I dont have any inspiration to, or have had any since '04.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 5:31 pm


wow... that was like really good(not being sarcastic). i dont think ive ever heard someone write like that before about a person so i think its really awesome. you should keep writing stuff like that, dude.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:49 pm


....Love - a wildly misunderstood although highly desirable malfunction of the heart which weakens the brain, causes eyes to sparkle, cheeks to glow, blood pressure to rise and the lips to pucker.



the power of love is dangerous...

........poem is Good!
.......... biggrin
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