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 Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:00 am
~RAIN~
by Lacus(yeng)
The sky is always blue, the color makes me laugh.
The grass is always green, the color makes me sad.
Where is the drops of sky blue glory?
Where are they hiding in the blanket?
No clouds to make it grey, no rain to make them stay.
We'll all like some rain today, but they seem to go away,
to Georgia, Washington, Tennessee, Iowa even, but not to where
we really need em...
The sky is ALWAYS blue and the grass is ALMOST green...
where are the drops we need to make this world great?
where are the precious things to make the world green?
where are the blue rippels of glory to stay?
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Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:06 pm
I love it when it rains, and its a cute poem. You should make a poem next that can really capture the essence of rain =]
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:32 pm
i should huh? b sure to catch up on other poems i posted..tho there arent many lol
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:03 pm
Lillith Selph I love it when it rains, and its a cute poem. You should make a poem next that can really capture the essence of rain =] Definately. I think that you would be even better if you added some abstraction to your poetry. Keep up the good work! ~ heart
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Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 7:35 pm
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