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Suma-Kaur

PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:20 am


Majority of my writings can be found at: www.suma-kaur.deviantart.com

Samples of my works can be found on this thread

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If u want to comment on something i would like you to just put the title of the work and your comment that way you dont have to quote the whole thing smile
PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:30 am


Something i wrote after i saw my spiritual teacher Amma

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Rebirth

I was reborn in Amma's presence. She took away my fear instilled faith. She took away my pain instilled courage. She broke through the coldness in my heart instilled unconditional love and advised/directed me in the path of compassion, peace, and gave me strength. She gave me meaning in my life and helped my divided heart to come together. I beleive that by my actions as a devotee of Amma's im spreading love to others by all that Amma has given and taught to me. She watches over me through looking at her picture Amma can see everything you do. My prayers have started to be answered only through faith i beleive i came to these answers. If one has faith they cant have fear and if one has fear one cannot have faith. Amma said that i am now her child and now she is my Amma my mother.

Suma-Kaur


Suma-Kaur

PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:05 pm


Something i wrote back in high school. I have posted parts of the writing piece just for protection of my work

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Culture Clash

Growing up with Indian parents can be very challenging. The American culture is very different than the Indian culture and it is very hard for the parents to adjust.My parents came to America in 1976. They moved because they wanted better opportunities and they thought moving here would provide them. They moved to Skokie in 1980.

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Depression is an illness that affects many people. It is something that should be treated once it has been noticed. My parents thought it was just a phase but I,unfortunately, got worse. At the time the depression became worse, my parents had to seek professional help. My parents did not understand the concept of therapy but now they are happy that I got help and that I'm on my way to recovery.

Even though there is a huge clash between American and Indian culture it is worth listening to professionals. Hopefully, when there is a good professional to work with, they will explain the American culture and be patient. It is so important to listen because the child may be trying to say things to get help. Sometimes parents must do things that they are hesitant to do but it all comes down to wanting the child to be mentally healthy.

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This is not only with Indian parents but for for every culture. It's important that parents support the child. By supporting the child, parents are doing the best thing they can do and it is one way to help the child. I learned that not all parents will support the child but that the child himself can get support from other people. My message to other teens dealing with similar issues is to not ever give up hope because there is always one person who cares and that person is you.

I am a survivor who survived a lot of difficulties. I care about other teenagers and that is why I started writing to help other kids who suffer from depression. I have gone through many things and I understand how painful depression can be. Some things that helped me recover from my depression are doing things that I enjoy like playing my flute, writing stories, focusing on my future, drawing, and doing meditation. Playing my flute and writing stories helps me to express how I feel. Focusing on my future helps me to realize that I can get better and that I can change myself and live my own life. Lastly, doing meditation really helps me gain inner peace.

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I was in therapy ever since I was 11 years old and it took me 6 long years to find my light. It was a long and rough road but I am a survivor and I will always be one. Thanks to all my therapists and psychiatrists, past and present, that helped me grow into a caring young women.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:21 am


Believe in yourself and you shall succeed
Believe in your abilities and never let people pull you down
Believe in yourself when you don’t know what to do
Believe in your strength to help carry you through
Believe in your power of your inner strength
Believe and have faith you can make it through
Believe in your higher power when you are unsure
Believe in yourself for you are your own cheerleader
Believe in yourself
Believe in your strength
And in all that life has to offer
You shall succeed

Suma-Kaur


Suma-Kaur

PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:25 am


There is always a rainbow
There is always s hope
There is always someone to throw you a rope
I will always remember the love you showed me
Even when times got rough
I will make it through and get stronger each and every day
There is always a way to pull yourself up and push forward
Because there is always more ahead of you
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:27 am


It's weird being a girl
Ask any woman in the world
It can be scary
Everything must be in place
It can be funny
All the makeup and clothes are fun too
It can be embarrassing and you will not
have a clue
But I still say I am the pillow queen
And a diva too if you know what I mean

Suma-Kaur


Suma-Kaur

PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:34 am


On the golden prairie sits a young girl
Lost among the tall grasses.
Like a new born faun
Quietly waiting for its mother’s return
She waits and waits
Hoping to be found

She watches the beautiful summer sky turn inky dark,
Forming the blackness of the night
She listens, quiet as a mouse,
Hoping for the sound of anything or anyone,
Coming to rescue her
She hears something – the rustling of leaves
It is just a lonely prairie dog scrambling past her
She is lost
Waiting,
Waiting to be found

She is like a mouse, hiding in the bush
To scared to move and to scared to cry out
The wind begins to sneak up behind her,
Lifting her skirt and playing her hair
She waits and waits
Hoping to be found.

A tear slowly creeps down her cheek,
A soft sigh escapes her lips
The trees begin to whisper,
Don’t be scared be brave.
The leaves dance around her
Covering her like a blanket
She is lost
Waiting
Waiting to be found.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:01 pm


Needing to Escape

Needing to escape the pain in my mind, the tense feelings in my mind, the scary feelings i have that i just dont undersand. I feel like i am boxed in soffocating and dying inside. I need to escape the madness of my mind. Yet f i escape it will still be within me but somehow someway i want to be able to wash it all away. I am needing to escape but I know deep down I cant hopefully everything will be okay and the pain inside will subside

Suma-Kaur

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