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 Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 10:29 am
i finished meh avi but i havnt got to foto copy it yet so i got this other pic from awhile ago that u guys can look at
heres the linkk:
http://oxellebellxo.deviantart.com/art/chessie-104050638
i gotta start this comic but yea ive been busyy :/
so yea u guys comment and critique it. u guys can red line it too if ya want but yea im getting better...still have proportion issues in the chest area xd and hiding the hands but other then that i have to say this picture doesnt look to badd biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:39 pm
Indeed you are getting better!!
I don't usually post much, but I always look, and I've been looking at your pictures and I love how determined you are. biggrin
For a bit of critique, the breasts are a tad too large, and the chest area under them is too small/thin. I'm not sure if that helps, but I really hope it does!!
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:17 pm
yea i have proportion issues lol mrgreen
and yes it did helpp :]
thank youu biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:08 pm
If you already noticed the proportion and boob problems then otherwise it's fine. Although, practice a bit more on connecting the neck and face. The way it's done now looks a bit awkward.
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:23 pm
boobtastic eek lol but you are getting better and better. Once thing I noticed was that your torsos are loooong and skinny (especially in the 'sami update') keep working on anatomy and you'll be great.
Also: I faved 'city of fire'. That piece is amazing! I don't know where you got your patience but I'm jealous!
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:29 am
Yeah draw the hands xD Even if you're bad and you don't want to ruin a pic with erase marks while working on hands, doodle! In class or something just doodle during a boring unimportant lecture of whatever.... Just keeep draaaawing hands and a variety of poses and expressions. I actually haven't seen your other artwork so just based on this, draw hands, try different expressions and poses, then try out a guy. Good luck biggrin cute pic btw
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:32 am
The_Brightest_Moon Yeah draw the hands xD Even if you're bad and you don't want to ruin a pic with erase marks while working on hands, doodle! In class or something just doodle during a boring unimportant lecture of whatever.... Just keeep draaaawing hands and a variety of poses and expressions. I actually haven't seen your other artwork so just based on this, draw hands, try different expressions and poses, then try out a guy. Good luck biggrin cute pic btw Agreed on the hands. Though not the easiest things to draw, they are important. I'd suggest drawing a few sets of hands in the same position, using your own hand as reference. O-o Though in my opinion, drawing guys is easier then drawing girls. (guys are more blocky IMO, so it's a bit easier to cover the original sketch lines.)
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:50 am
wanna know why youre getting better...its because you took the next step and colored it. Most people get to this step and mess it all up. Good Job!
It takes a while to learn hands. Its easy to learn them if you copy them from other pictures first then try drawing you own hand in different positions. Personally i think the easiest hand position to draw is looking atthe hand directly from the side while it is "pointing at soomething"
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 6:06 pm
OHHH! I like the picture!!!
Grade: A
For critique, I know that you have heard this from 10000000000 other people, but the breasts jet out to the side. Usually, a girl's chest will face more outword (sorry, it's hard to explain this), but anyways, I would recomend looking at other peep's art work, and maybe ad shadowing under the chust instead of it just jetting out sidways...
But still, great job!
(determination will get you far!)
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 7:03 pm
hey guysi havnt been on here in awhile and i was like NO ONE LIKES IT T-T and then i see all these comments and i was like YAY xd
so yea i know i have issues in the torso/breast area. but im gonna work on it.
and i have this one drawing of a guy...i relli should upload it. its like a head shot tho. it looks amazing in my opinion :]
and now im rambling....lol
well thanks you guys so much. im gonna work on my hands and stuff and torso. ill keep u guys posted.
and again thank you all so much mrgreen
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