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 Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 11:35 am
Kinda one of my first attempts Be gentle,
As I bite down upon your flesh,
And the first crimson drop hits my tongue,
A single thought whisper’s through out my mind,
Although temptation is irresistible,
How long can this last?
As I continue to feast upon you,
You whimper slightly,
Though I still hold you in my embrace,
You shiver slightly and I grasp you tighter,
Like I would never let you go again.
As the life slowly fade's from your vein's,
You struggle no longer,
The end is inevitable,
You can see it coming,
But still you don't struggle,
Though death is near you still will always remain close to me,
Though the life is dimming from your eyes,
You will always remain in your true form,
An angel.
As you pass on to your true form,
And leave to be alone as I will always remain,
This is what happens when you receive,
A Vampyr’s kiss..
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:06 am
I liked it! I've never seen vampire spelled like that! It's actually kinda cool!
Keep up the great work, I'd love to read more of your work!
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:06 am
it's very good! i enjoyed reading it!
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