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| Lupin The Vapour- Sadness |
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25% |
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| mexicantacos2003- a - (c) |
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75% |
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| vampire_masqueradesbff- Where am I? |
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The Indeed Master Captain
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 Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:57 am
Poetry: there are no requirements but if it is not 'poetic' then it will be considered placed in the wrong forum. I hope everyone knows a poem from a novel, but if you're not sure if it is or not, just PM o0-WGU-0o
remember- you can only submit one writing in two calagories.
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:10 pm
Lupin The Vapour
Sadness
Please Comment
Sadness fills my mind and soul,
And consumes my core.
Dousing me like a wet coal
In a puddle on the floor
"Why do you feel this way,
When it's all going well?"
I'm asked this question every day,
When I'm in my cell.
Hate sparks far behind my eyes,
Burning in my mind,
Throwing ash into my skies
I can no longer find
While the fire burns my head,
Cold eats at my heart.
Dark ones, through my mind it threads,
And the good depart.
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:02 pm
Comments and critique are welcome.
This is one of my original pieces that I wrote when I was beginning to like writing.
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a - (c)
by mexicantacos2003
In the vast dampness of my mind,
The broke and the cheap cease to exist.
Maybe, but it matters to those who keep to themselves.
A thought comes and goes; never see the wrong because your innocence keeps lying to you.
Boxes filled with tears and the world turns its pockets inside out.
You're held down with false hopes while waking in morning's first cry.
Seeds plow the fertile farmer and hearts pour coffee in the noon.
Flying newspapers have wings and a paternal instinct awakens with new and gay and merry.
Dancing planes strike the horizon for your joy.
The chord cut the umbilical and the breath of life is anew.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:40 am
vampire_masqueradesbff
where am i?
hope you like it please comment
as i fly to heaven i fall to hell
as i sing my way from hell to heaven
neither do i go
so where am i
neither do i go
so where am i?
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yiska-the-nightmare-eater
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