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 Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:54 pm
I've already noticed that his left hand is weird. I also think his legs look awkward because of the left pant leg, it makes the legs look different lengths. Criticism totally welcome. I don't mind if you're mean. ^_^ 
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 2:08 am
Only two things look a little odd, and these are being really really picky.
His right foot (our left) looks like it should be pointed more towards the other foot, due to the fold angles and body posture. It may just be me, but it looks off.
The neck looks of a bit too... I don't know how, but it just looks like it's in front of the face in depth... O-o sounds odd right? XD Probably just a me thing again. Just connect the head and body weird... kind of hard to explain.
Overall though, very impressive.
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:19 am
the right foot is off... because of the fold in the pants showing the legs are facing more to his left that means is right foot should as well.
I'm not too fond of the neck being so small.. even with the style maybe make it a tad bigger
other then that It's pretty good I would really urge you to start adding more detail with your cloths. Such as folds, and working with the accesoriees. Like with the blet, show the buckle and put detail into and what not..
It's still cute though =]
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:43 am
i like this alot its a really good picture i dont see any mistakes but iam not good myself lol
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:16 pm
omg this looks good biggrin he looks like a pokemon trainerr xd lol
yes i know random but eh thats me
so anyways for the critique im just gonna have to say his shoes annoy me lol mrgreen they look 2 different shapes [that might be from the way hes standing but idk] and one looks like a low top and the others like a high top? idk :] but yea other hten that...it looks goodd
keep up the good work biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 1:13 am
oxellebellxo omg this looks good biggrin he looks like a pokemon trainerr xd lol yes i know random but eh thats me so anyways for the critique im just gonna have to say his shoes annoy me lol mrgreen they look 2 different shapes [that might be from the way hes standing but idk] and one looks like a low top and the others like a high top? idk :] but yea other hten that...it looks goodd keep up the good work biggrin Thanks. ^_^ I thought the shoes were weird too...I'm not good with the shoes yet...
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Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:49 am
My way of joking is to tell the truth...
WOW! it's really great! I wish I could draw like this sad
Proportions are good and it has many details smile I would give you 6/5 biggrin
...It is the funniest joke in the world...
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:42 pm
I think you could get away with the shoes pointing the way they are if you lower the corner you made on the left pant leg to the same hight as the other corner on the right leg. And I think the neck may look a little off because it might be too thin.
I really like how clean you sketch, I'm envious of your line work XD;;;
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:30 pm
Little Fleur My way of joking is to tell the truth...
WOW! it's really great! I wish I could draw like this sad
Proportions are good and it has many details smile I would give you 6/5 biggrin
...It is the funniest joke in the world... Thanks! That means alot to me.
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:31 pm
Konbanwa_megami I think you could get away with the shoes pointing the way they are if you lower the corner you made on the left pant leg to the same hight as the other corner on the right leg. And I think the neck may look a little off because it might be too thin. I really like how clean you sketch, I'm envious of your line work XD;;; Yeah, I realised that after I scanned it in and uploaded it.... crying Thanks though, I'm good at sketching cuz it's pretty much the only thing I can do. XD
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:53 pm
Nice picture :]
I think he needs some more detail, like folds, on his pants. I don't think his legs look weird, maybe its just me.
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:48 pm
lilchibitori Nice picture :] I think he needs some more detail, like folds, on his pants. I don't think his legs look weird, maybe its just me. Yup. Detail. I've been working on that.
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:01 pm
I like everything from the waist up (well except the small neck but thats an easy fix wink ) my problem is with the legs/feet. Yes men have more narrow hips, but this guy literally shrinks from the waist down. make sure your drawing the legs underneath the puffy pants before you draw the clothing, that will help you get the the flow of the figure, and also help the feet issue. (it will also help you when doing the folds of the clothing)
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Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:24 pm
kerri46 I like everything from the waist up (well except the small neck but thats an easy fix wink ) my problem is with the legs/feet. Yes men have more narrow hips, but this guy literally shrinks from the waist down. make sure your drawing the legs underneath the puffy pants before you draw the clothing, that will help you get the the flow of the figure, and also help the feet issue. (it will also help you when doing the folds of the clothing) Thanks! That's great feedback! XD
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