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PostPosted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 1:59 am


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Alright, since no one has responded to my request in the fanfiction forum, I assume that no one ever checks it. So here is my request:

I am writing two fanfictions that has to do with crossovers. They are both Final Fantasy, Water and Of Angel. So let me break down what each story contains.

Of Angels: A Final Fantasy crossover between VII and IX. This one is the first one I have been working with and reedited it previously. I have gotten as far as two chapters and I am halfway done getting the third one out (finally). This story will not have a yaoi paring or scenes, however it will have violence in future chapters. This one is rated T for teens. If you would like to the beta for this story, please PM me.

Water: A Final Fantasy crossover between IX and X. This one is very new and the second chapter is being worked on as well. The second chapter had just started so I am not done with it yet. This story has a beta, but the said beta is slow to edit and return the chapter. Took him/her a week to give back the finished product. Although I am a patient writer, I too have standards. I figure that if editing the story will interfere with his/her work I'll have to look for someone else that does have the time to do it. This story will have a yaoi paring but it will not be announced until the time has come. It will also have explicit homosexual situation where it will require a very mature editor, one that is not sensitive to the said situation I am about to produce. I will not say what the situation is, but know that it is one that will be... rather difficult to produce. This one is rated T for teen. It will remain that way for fanfiction.net, but for what I had said about the homosexual situation that will be removed out of the story to stay within ff.net's policies. However I will put the full story in AFF.net. If you would like to be the beta for this story you must be 18 years of age or over. PLEASE! It is very important that you are 18+ old. One, I don't want to be providing descriptive adult situation to someone underage. Even though I won't know your true age, please respect my wishes for this. PM me if you are interested.

That is all I would like for Christmas. :3 It also helps if you have a messenger of some sort. MSN or Yahoo is most likely. I don't have AIM, sorry. Why does it matter? That way we have a way to communicate with one another so suggestions could be made how to change something without having to wait a whole day for me to respond back (I don't check my mail ever five minutes). I find that a very handy tool. So... Yea... Help this illiterate fool out!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:46 pm


I'm sorry, but I don't feel qualified to, honestly. I can't write myself, and I'm awful at critique. I also don't quite fit your conditions for the second fic... sweatdrop

I'd really, really like to read them when you're done, though!

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:27 am


Hhm...
I could do some commenting if needed. I know I'm critical and I like to think that I know how to give useful feedback. But I'm hesitant to write any prose in English, for its not my first language.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 12:05 am


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Thank you both. Head on over to fanfiction.net if you want to criticize it. I know it's not good, but any additional fee back is better then none.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:26 pm


Well thus far you seem literate enough to me. Which is a huge step. I frequent GAFF so I've seen some really horrible stuff in my day. I'd love to help you out and I am over 18.
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