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theodore edwards
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:39 pm


Humans...So simply altered...so...malleable...Something that if you give it choices it can choose...or even go against the choices...with this "human will"...anyone can live their own life..and even have control of others...but what is so fascinating about the human?...Is its ability to end even the life of others...and the fact that it is so simple to do...you can make it lengthy or short...and the fact that you are in control...yes...the more a person ends a life, the even more a human wants to do so...may seem dispicable? Correct? But have you done it? Youve probably killed something right? Oh, but im just trying to stand up for myself right? Putting you on stand to prevent the noticeability of my actions? Ha ha ha...so you ask...who am I? you can just call me the one who seems to enjoy the abilities I have been given. I mean, if you can do as you please on this earth, shouldnt you do whatever you want? Even if it seems wrong to others? Ive been taking up your time long enough havent I? Ive taken the most important thing to you, time. Im slowly killing yo arent I? So why dont i end your slow...agonizing, life?...


This begins the story, but does it sound like a good opening "line"? XD
PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:56 pm


pretty insane ( in a good way 3nodding )

grimmjow3


Twilight Fox Zero
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:07 am


id say it could work out as the start.
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