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 Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:39 am
ODE TO TEDDY BEAR
Teddy Bear, teddy bear; where art thou teddy Bear?
The one who holds all my decrets, the one who
understands loneliness.
Teddy Bear, teddy bear; my precious teddy bear,
the one who captures all my tears, the one who
listens to my fears.
Teddy Bear, teddy bear, my loveable teddy bear;
the one who loves me no matter what. Teddy Bear,
teddy bear, I love you so; In my eyes you'll always
be worth more than gold. I love you Teddy Bear!
(You know GOD is alot like a teddy bear. He's always there.
Some of us need to learn to talk and turn to GOD as much
as we did/do to Teddy Bear. The thing is, Teddy Bear
can't make things happen, GOD can and will.)
Written By Claysong/kokopelliqueen (c)2003
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:00 pm
I liked it, its flow was great and the last stanza brought it all together. The analogy between God and a teddy bear was great too, although I'm not as religious as I once was but I still liked it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:01 pm
Thank You vewry much. I don't go to Church like I used to but I do know that if GOD wasn't a part of my life that I wouldn't be here or where I am today without him. Thanks for reading and commenting. I look forward to reading some of your thoughts and poems.
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