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 Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:45 pm
Click click click
Goes the clock
Making that rythm
Insanity slowly crawls
Into the depths of my mind
With the rythm
Click click click
With each second going by
A new voice sounds
In a minute I have a chorus
Hyming it's ode to insanity
With the metronome that is the clock
Click click click
The time creeps away
Going unnoticed
The voices continue
Singing the haunting song
That stays attached to my conscience
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:12 am
Amazing. I loved the rhyme scheme (if there was one, it sounded like one to me). The flow was amazing, it never broke, it kept it self going. smile
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:13 pm
nice going waffles!!! it follows my way of abstract thinking perfectly... very well done!!!
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