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 Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 1:08 pm
" Wishing for Twilight "
My hands are embraced,
With tears of longing.
These whispered lips of a dreamer,
Graze the fallen stars.
Time has once again failed me,
For you have yet to arrive.
And as I sit staring at the moon,
Counting the tears I've shared.
My memories haunt me,
Squeezing my already broken silence.
Where are you,
Under this night sky?
Are we wishing,
Under the same star?
Can I feel your warmth,
One last time?
So I'll wait for your answers,
Under this nocturnal watch.
Waiting for the amber twilight,
To shed it's wings on me.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:06 pm
I can so see this fitting in with how Bella feels for Edward in the book "Twilight". Its a very mellow poem but gets the point across.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:59 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 7:38 pm
Great job! Your discription isamazing!
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:22 pm
Yayyyyyy, thank you very much mister!
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